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What became of happily ever after?
another book perhaps?
"fractured fairytales?"
The book I'm now reading.
Love left her crimson
on my soul,
no stain can undue.
I'm raw.
I cry for release,
from tormenting numbness.
I beg...
and I plead...
For I've danced with devils like you before,
this souls already tarnished,
so leave your stain,
and have your way with me,
make me bleed,
and scream,
and beg,
as you rip open my flesh,
revealing my secrets,
hidden longings untold,
atleast I'll feel something.
I'll bathe in your sin
as you heat my souls flesh
then "undone" will be
my saddest delight.
in a moment of pleasure.
To worship a goddess
such as you..
fatal.
So please...
kill me with your penetrating plastic,
I'll beg you for more.
Tara please???
To please your cravings
will feed my deep hunger.
So in breathless silence;
I beg,
I plead,
I throb,
I wait!
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you like her a lot. lol. Nice to see it all come together.
...our day on the "perfect 10" thread had a bit of an effect! On your poetry too! -- its cleaner (technically speaking) than your early efforts -- and emotion is conveyed with some excellent lines!
A twenty-two line tribute to torment and treats! Well done, fawnie!
pulsing in the blood flow. Excellent passion courses this poem. You'll want to add apostrophes to "soul's" in a couple of places. I wasn't sure if the combining of at and least was intentional in this line or not: "atleast I'll feel something." Other than those typos an excellent, passionate poem.
jim : )