- Non-Erotic Poetry
- terra firma - 1.unlock
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Click hereA pariah in perfection,
only headphones and no headlight.
Clinging anchored to that corner,
fallen stalemate out of stage fright.
Take a seat, majestic mourner,
dim that light to pale reflection,
until everything succumbs to
anti-social rejection.
Have you found your prime objective,
elevating through the clutter?
To that holier-than-heaven
that will send your soul aflutter.
But the holier is hollow,
it will bring no heart attraction,
and the heaven right beside you
is the yield of interaction.
- COMMENTS
jthserraabout 20 years agobut without the rhythm and flow of 2. The first line is fantastic, but later
"...until everything succumbs to
anti-social rejection."
got to feeling a little forced. I think this one fell into the telling not showing routine. Overall the poem works, but lacks the sparkle of 2...
jim : )
