- Non-Erotic Poetry
- terra firma - 2.abandon
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Click hereabandon your armour, hang on to the hope
of searching solutions through kaleidoscope
of spellcasting mirrors and looking glass lies
where truth is eternal and love never dies
abandon your grayness, the rainbow awaits
we'll travel the archway to shape our own fates
we'll spin in a whirlpool of shimmer and tones
and clean us from burdens, let go of the stones
abandon your caution, refrain from the rhyme
explode intermezzos through echoes in time
expand the horizon that keeps you in bounds
surrender to splendour, kneel down to the sounds
abandon all reason to flow with the swirl
embrace the enigma while notions unfurl
just scream out your dream as the universe sings
come climax, collapse, spread your heavenly wings
- COMMENTS
jthserraabout 20 years agoIt works wonderfully. I would have been so easy to slip into the predictible sing song poem here, but the rhythm and wording here deftly avoided that common trap in using couplets. There was some fun internal rhyme here and there that enhanced the overall effect. Very, very good...
jim : )
