The Last Breath

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There’s a sweetness in death,
A candy-coated pleasure to be had,
A release of fear, no matter how bad.


There’s a peace in death,
A last word that is so content,
An end of life, that only you resent.


There’s a calm in death,
A release that feels like great sex,
An end of life, like sex with an ex.


There's a harmony in death,
A lyrical, musical final note,
An end of life, nothing left to emote.


There’s a bliss in death,
The reaper seduces me into sleep,
Too bad, he’s old, perverted, and a creep.

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troubledonetroubledoneabout 11 years ago
death

I think equating death to sex with an ex was masterly

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Sweetness in Life

There’s a sweetness in life,

A deep seated pleasure to be had,

Soft gentle kisses can they be bad.

There’s a peace in this life,

Of touches content,

Filling your soul you cannot resent.

There’s a calm in this life,

Like your touch after sex,

Hold him so tight don't make him your ex.

There's a harmony in life,

With no final note,

Friendship and love all to emote.

There’s a bliss in this life,

As quietly you sleep,

She is quit young and soft as a sheep

SweetieBeeSweetieBeeover 11 years ago
Umm...

Okay, spooky. :S

I'm going back to my pink fluffy girlieness now!

Maria2394Maria2394about 13 years ago
I liked it until

the last line. You had something beautiful going on the creeped it up a little bit. BUT, the concept is good and I did have fun reading it

:) maria

tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

Very well done....good parallels between 'death' and other concepts :)