The Problem with Nuts

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Do you have any idea how many nuts it takes

To bolt up all the bolts that must be bolted?
Some of them weigh three pounds each
and no matter how hard I try
I can never be as strong as a man.

Bolts are heavier than nuts.
They are longer, thicker and possess
a prominent head, but
nuts are more difficult to carry up

Two hundred and fourteen steps.
The benefits to lugging those nuts
(while working the jobsite near the dam)
is the view of the river valley

And the awe of knowing
that an unborn flood is waiting
behind that cement wall.

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9 Comments
ishtatishtatalmost 10 years ago
Dam good.

Only just saw this and nothing to say except, well done

tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
AND ONE MUSTNT EVER FORGET

the washers and tools needed, TK U MLJ LV NV

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 10 years ago
Wow ! Nuts , bolts , a Dam ,.....

A great view & a greater Poem ! High 5- ed .

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 10 years ago

This is marvelous. You weave something complex from two simple objects and open up a vast expanse for the reader to imagine. And the metaphorical view from the top makes a really good poem that much better.

TsothaTsothaalmost 10 years ago

Clever wording, well weaved double-meaning.

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