The Science of Stressing a Point

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Liar
Liar
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Everything

    - snaps -

at the given angle
on sub realistic cracks.

Plexiglas turned
to milk,
silver swooning
Uri Geller style.

And remember,
There is no spoon.

Solid rock is vapor
chained to conventions,
and words you weave so carefully
are nothing but primordial grunts
with table manners.

Remember this
when something

    - snaps -

by just your
innocent ministrations.

You can find the fractures,
the beutiful combination of
pressure and frequency

and the perfect angle of attack

to bring down
monuments.

Liar
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dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
nice concept

and a 5 to boot.....nice write......don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice

I gave it a 4.75 because of the spealling. sandspike

LiarLiaralmost 19 years agoAuthor
milk...

Thanks for all the comments, guys. :) I can't stop looking at that one ugly little typo though...

Tung, the milk reference...have you ever tried bending transparent plastic like pvc or plexiglas? It turns milky white from all the micro fractures it causes.

TathagataTathagataalmost 19 years ago
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" there is no spoon"

"Solid rock is vapor

chained to conventions"

Are you getting all Zen on me?

Excellent work.

And the end almost sounds like a quote from " The Art of War"

Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
metioned in reviews

mentioned in Wednesday's reviews

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