The Transformation of Du

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Note: Literotica's poetess Du Lac has recently started an exciting new life in the western United States. This poem celebrates her transformation!

As the shackles melt away
a crippled wing unravels
lit by waning lunar reflection

like an exquisitely pleated fan
iridescent facets of reflected love
combine in a kaleidoscopic melee

Soon both wings emerge...
gaining their confidence
from a distant poignant cry

so alike yet so different
this second one, the he-bird
calling his new friend towards home

As the broken wing is strengthened
by their unspoken bond
only a miracle remains

in a heartbeat buoyancy returns
flight is restored
an arc of hope in the sky

following the plaintive chant
pipes of divine fulfillment
reeds of just forgotten dreams

Soon they are closer
telegraphic beckonings
toward the ever expanding dawn

ecstasy returns
as new found love
shivers in the rarefied air

One last look-
two birds in formation
their hearts beating together
as one


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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Exquisite.

What a lovely way of referring to a couple: I loved this stanza:

One last look-

two birds in formation

their hearts beating together

as one

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A nice write for Du; love the imagery.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Blushing Sack... thank you so much for this beautiful poem.

du lac~

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