- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Thinking like a Star
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Thinking like a Star
Thoughts,
like the stars so very many
of the perfect way to shine
like a star I have yet to find.
Moments came like the wind
embraced in realities passing
that never made it to pen.
All that is existent before me,
absorbed in the dark mass of space
thinking like a star.
- COMMENTS
Liarover 17 years agoGood poem.
I get the feeling that you could have done more with it though. Maybe if you omitted the direct star mentions in the poem. It's such a strong title that it would hold that metaphor on it's own.
Anyway, I'm nitpiucking. This is one of your better ones. Keep em coming.
duddle146over 17 years agoA beautiful poem...with such an ethereal beauty. The innumerable thoughts like stars light up our creative sparks to fan the flames of creativity.
Anonymousover 17 years agojust need to look in the mirror and see your starry reflection...big sigh...blue
