to kill a poem

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I killed a poem
it was my own undoing
a few great lines
I hid with the shine

like an acorn
I place it in its own realm
under the oaks near the elms

I tossed a bunch of leaves
to splatter more realism there
I hung the moss to filter the suns glare

A victim walked by I snagged,
"See that poetic acorn in all its glory?"
They said, "I see no acorn or poem, sorry!"

I had to retrieve the acorn and said,
"See, a beautiful acorn," as they were going
I killed a beautiful acorn poem

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Oh Art

I have done this before, a super idea. I loved the whole poem ;)

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
may I be honest?

You had something really good going there with those first 3 stanzas. The last two really detract from the potential beauty of the poem. By the way, the title is brilliant.