To Travel In Small Steps

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Liar
Liar
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Mind the gap, American!
         you're American
         anywhere you go
         these days
A nightingale melodic thrill
pierced the rumble mumble
of Osaka Grand Central
something or the other.
         I wasn't there for place names
         but for faces
         and smells
For a face I turned,
and for a smile...
         curious black pools
         and a white enamel line
         behind shy lips
...to melt
right before the gap,
and lost my speech
for a second.
What glimmers deep in there?
Why does her hair fall
like so...
         golden cut angle
         geometric perfection
         even while caught
         by swirl and whisp
...and who ignited that fire?
But a crooked Thank you
escaped my lips
somehow at last,
and my sweaty palm
extended a greeting,
         careful not to crush
         her slender shape
to introduce
Kimika, passer-by, goer-north.
Come, American. Better seats
in the other end.

         and who the hell
         was I to argue?
Some hours passing by,
diversion, new smells
and a face ever imprinted
when I close my eyes.
So where you going, American?
So am I, oh let me show you
all the things I love.

         there are so many fractions
         of any given place...
         ...the Great Dragon
         no exception
A day and a night,
fast forward by,
to a Tokyo morning
and two happy
but hung over travellers
         still quite strangers
part way
on a summer dry street
with a tight hug,
and a kiss on the cheek.
         the only one I got,
         but I don't mind,
         I got faces and smells,
         demand nothing more
And I never got around
to tell her
I'm not American.
So I guess I still might be,
somewhere up north
from Osaka Grand Central
something or the other,
when she close her lids.

Liar
Liar
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I love this

A snapshot - a memory tinted slightly with regret. Lovely images. A gentle read.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
lovely

especially the pace of this poem and the description of her hair... you are really good Liar and your talent shines through nuclear in this poem, one of your best I think :)

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
For reasons

of my own

I love this

brought back some wonderful memories for me

Thank you

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
Left a mark

on her and on your readers. Beautiful poem, Liar.

minsueminsuealmost 20 years ago
You may not see poetry,

but the rest of us sure as hell do. =0)

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