Waiting or Thunder

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I am bits of string
and scraps of fabric,
held together with loose stitches.
My structure is wind blown and sun faded.

I’ll come apart in your hands,
I am not really fit for eggs at the moment,
or fat warm bird bellies.

I’m tethered
to the sway of life
by hair thin threads
thickened with forgotten down.

I am bent twig.
I am dead bramble.
I am sad ache.

Please don’t touch me,
unless you are sure of your intent.
I am one strong storm
away from feeling better.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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Powerful emotions built into this one, despite the suggestion of fragility.

dominateme1dominateme1almost 16 years ago
Awesome

Your poem is absolutely beautiful. thank you. I enjoyed it very much!

oregon_galoregon_galalmost 16 years ago
enjoyed!

thanks for the read this morning!

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 16 years ago
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Great poem and it's mentioned on the review thread. :)