Warnings

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wakingDown
wakingDown
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Just a little tremor, nothing major
Not enough to spill a drink
Not a shake

A little tremble in the fingers there
Not quite steady now
Not so still

A warning all the same of days to come
Not a pleasant thought
Not good


wakingDown
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DesejoDesejoover 10 years ago

I like this because it could be applied to many situations. I appreciate your poems for what they do not say, although I think you could also go the other way and say more (and blow us all out of the water).

I noticed a probably unintentional play of words drink/shake. It's conceivable that a tremor would be almost enough to spill a mixed drink, but not a shake (as in milkshake). 5 for me.