Wasted

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Tokin' female -
boilermaker bitch trippin'
over salty tongues of tequila
basted breath; the worm
squirmin' as kamikaze kisses
rock the cash bar.

Liquor, lick 'er,
never been sicker
of trash talkin' bicker
in a cold cunt's daquiri dreams

The elder bury whine
'neath the burning blunts,
and a slower gin fizzles
through the crushed ice tease.

In toxic, hated prisons
the bong blows peyote prisms
across fade dead to black
and blue bawled reign bows.

Can a bliss haze
blanket mimosa memories
until tomorrow is burned
out and blasted back
to fresh fleshed free fall
fucking?

Want not the wasted knot
of a weed whirled whore -
strung out hash gash
drifting through a long lost life.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent

play on words.

"...elder bury whine..."

and many others ...still with a point easily seen. Loved it.

v~

hugo_samhugo_samover 18 years ago
Intense

and powerful with despair and longing. Well woven

cloudycloudyover 18 years ago
wow!

the new twist of the words just blows me away. Powerful.

logophilelogophileover 18 years ago
Reeling...

from the power and intensity of your words. Nicely done - the images and the alliterations blend so magically here. Brava!

lil_elvislil_elvisover 18 years ago
Haven't a clue

what you could be talking about.

Can I sell you this bridge?

Havin a flashback. Brilliant stuff, imp

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