Weave

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Go! Weave the starlight
in your hair hanging down.
Run through the forest
past rivers and streams.

Run through the forest
let the stars be your gown.
Gather an armful
of childhood dreams!

Gather an armful
don¡¦t let a one drop!
Bring all to the birch grove
weave them in the trees.

Bring all to the birch grove
hang them each; do not stop.
Weave them in the branches
let each dream hang free

Weave them in the branches
make sure they are tight
for these are your future
each one from the heart.

For these are your future
so starry and bright.
No hunger and illness
no souls torn apart.

No hunger and illness
no bullies or monsters.
No more broken hearts
no battle ground dead.

No more broken hearts
for these sleepy babes.
They weave a bright future
as they lay in their bed.

They weave a bright future
you must be their guides.
Their tomorrows come quickly
their sorrows too soon.

Their tomorrows come quickly
so store up their dreams.
Go! Weave the starlight
and dance down the moon!


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9 Comments
average ginaaverage ginaover 19 years ago
Wow. Simply wow.

I am so blown away. I read the words, then I began to read the rhythm. What a beautiful technique of reusing the third line of the previous stanza again. I'm totally amazed. Wow. When I grow up, I wanna write like that! Absolutely excellent!!!

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
somehow reminds me

of being alone in my yard when I was little ( and we lived in the NC mountains)I always wished upon stars and the moon too. thanks for the memories Boo, beautiful poem :)

boo, can you tell me? what do you wish for when your fondest wish comes true?

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Beautiful

phrases and sentiments. I love the final line!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
magical

So light and perfect for this form. Well done!

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Whimsical...

...and wonderful. A light-footed joy.

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