- Non-Erotic Poetry
- What??
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from the water
grasp the abundance
of the moon
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 16 years agoAuthorI have read Basho, I read Senna Jawa, he is very important to read, to study, this really is the first three lines of a Chinese form poem I was working on, the next word was "light", but putting that in would have taken the "ass" meaning out. Yes it is concise and yes it is horseshit. Object - a little fun. With Senna, and with multiple meanings.
TY
Bill Dadaalmost 17 years agoWhat??...an abundance of horseshit...in very few words. Must be why I liked it.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoNot a word wasted. A concise piece that elegantly draws you in. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews.
Tathagataalmost 17 years agobeen reading Basho at night under the covers haven't you?
I like this alot.
Nice work
