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Click hereWhat I hate (a triolet)
If you would know the things I hate
you'd wonder at my memories
and fold your arms and then berate
if you would know the things I hate.
But time moves on; its getting late
The sunlight makes those shadows flee.
If you would know the things I hate
you'd wonder at my memories.
You chose two very strong lines for the beginning and end
"If you would know the things I hate
you'd wonder at my memories"
This line seems a little awkard
"and fold your arms and then berate"
rather effective use of the form, much better than the sonnet