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Click hereWhat if the sun would turn to ice,
and with it came the rain?
What if the hands of time stood still,
would the pain still ring true?
What if you'd never walked away,
and stole with you my heart?
Would morning bring a new day?
Yesterday I died.
You put so much heartbreak into a few lines. Bravo!
Lil mouse, you made me feel it, I don't think there is better praise.
Gave me the creeps...but that what good poetry is supposed to do! Excellent!
I must agree with Miss Oatlash, I thought this was a really good poem. It's a beautifully simplistic sad little poem, with the last line of the poem completing the idea/emotion very nicely.