William Dreaming

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Selena_Kitt
Selena_Kitt
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Remembering our son
on Father's Day

William George
April 1, 2009
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life led me off the edge
of everything, daddy, but
i wasn’t scared because
i knew you loved me,
i heard your voice,

booming rumble in
mommy’s tummy,
i felt your hand press
my back, my head and
you rocked me to sleep
nights and
i knew you loved me.

i don’t know why
i couldn’t stay
when my narrow world
narrowed again and then
grew infinite wings,
i felt you
and then

i became you, but
i always was
a part, a whole
contained and complete.
sing me to sleep, daddy.
i am dreaming
the dream
onward.

Selena_Kitt
Selena_Kitt
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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 15 years ago
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Lovely I can feel your tears in every word

sir_goodheadsir_goodheadalmost 15 years ago
well now...

who IS the chicken shit that signed in as anonymous? It isn't NJ!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Dearest normal jean

That comment wasn't for YOU cause you DON'T come in that list of stupids oops I mean poets. By the way, everyone feels that it's YOU the "famous anonymous" who's ranting & moaning. And, also YOU are not a "Guru" or "Royal we" so take a chill pill & keep quiet.

normal jeannormal jeanalmost 15 years ago
dear selena

I hope you know that not all the "gurus", the so-called "real," poets are asses. I write poetry, or try to, and happen to love your work and have said so. I guess this comment is directed to the dummy that left the hateful comment. Don't lump us all together with the losers with attitude problems that low vote out of jealousy or label like anonymous did.

TE999TE999almost 15 years ago
Beautiful

(((HUGS))) Selena. This brought tears to my eyes.

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