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Click hereLost within my covers deep
I drift beyond the veil of sleep
Shedding thoughts of winter's chill
A dream of you, my mind instill
Golden bands, sun's dying rays
That kissed your skin, upon you plays
A warming beam across your breast
Enhancing now your curves and crests
In between the shadows fall
I'm glad the light can't reach you all
My hands have craved, my lips have sought
The parts the sun can reach you not
Now on your lips a smile grows
No words we speak, our bodies know
Drawn, compelled, the want, the need
Here the miles cannot impede
Reclined among your tangled sheets
Hair across your pillow sweeps
No garment hides your glowing skin
Your index curls--a sign: begin
Fingers finding first your feet
Your toes, your arch, my hands they heat
A voyage made by sparks through nerves
Igniting you, its purpose serves
Without intent your legs they spread
Fingertips on thighs do tread
Pursued behind by eager tongue
A sigh escapes from swollen lung
My mouth upon your velvet lips
And now between, tongue softly dips
Your scent, your taste, feed my desire
Crave to consume you, entire
Making paths through tousled hair
Your fingers grip, you gasp for air
Sucking mouth on swollen clit
Heady lust makes you submit
Up from your lap my form appears
"I want to be inside" you hear
Next to your head I plant my hands
Your pussy nudged by swollen gland
Hard nipples poke against my chest
Poised at your sex cock firmly rests
Burning eyes share wanting gaze
Shared breath, shared thoughts, our flesh ablaze
Divided by an urgent girth
Wet and stretched, a bliss unearthed
Filling you complete and whole
Uttered cries from pleasured souls
Heart a hammer, breath a pant
Eyes on fire, my cock a lance
Reaching parts so deep inside
Soon we are lost within the tide
Explosions in our hearts and heads
Eruption of my milky threads
Bodies mixed and limbs entwined
This ecstasy for which we pined
The wave abates, we melt as one
Now cooling breeze, and gone the sun
My whispering lips against your ear
"I adore you, Anna dear"
Tender kiss, and slowing hearts
We, joined as one, to sleep depart
Memories of orgasmic screams
Take me to dream within a dream
Wow, what an intense heartfelt poetry!
I wish I would be Anna..
Thank a lot! 5*
Suzz_
I liked the way this builds, first with the dream and then how the actual sex scene starts from the toes and works its way up. And specifically, the line, "Shared breath, shared thoughts, our flesh ablaze" is absolutely fantastic. I wish I'd written it.
I feel like you struggled to make some of the lines fit the rhythm and rhyme scheme, though; some of your lines feel a little unnatural and clunky.