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lobomao
lobomao
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His and her words
Hung like wet towels
To dry and shrink
In the winter sun
Blinding white flags
Fly like land locked kites
Still fighting in the wind
Even though we have gone
Far beyond away

lobomao
lobomao
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Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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Very powerful write. I especially liked:

'Far beyond away'

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Touching

Short but well crafted. I liked the images that you've used and the simile of 'hanging words' is pretty cool. Great stuff

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