you didn't hear the song

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Liar
Liar
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you didn't script a spell
no feather brush across those lips
that caught an inhale
parting

it was already there
the scent of fingertips
longing skin to rest upon
for beads to quill a trace
to slide a breath so close
a breathless face

you didn't open eyes
that had not watched your step
since long, that had not sighed

the old tales know
how blind and beautiful you are
a dreaming pioneer
how blue eyes glitter gist
when scars are just veneer

you didn't hear the song
but ignorance forgiven
the chorus is too strong

Liar
Liar
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lindianalindianaover 18 years ago
Listening...

...to you with baited breath...another please.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
your right!!!

I turned my volume up full blast and

I didn't hear the song ...either <grinin'>

great poem ...okay I'm lieing <laughin>

I didn't turn up the volume <smile>

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
!

it was already there

the scent of fingertips

longing skin to rest upon

for beads to quill a trace

to slide a breath so close

a breathless face <--outstanding lines, and I love how you ended this poem. Flowed smooth, and I like the throw in of rhymes here and there. Thanks for the read, saldne

sandspikesandspikeabout 19 years ago
Cool poetry

I love the title so I read the poem. This is good, I loose

my way and reread adjusting the volume, its good poetry.

doormousedoormouseabout 19 years ago
loved the title

Drew me in almost as much as your words.

Beautiful Liar.

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