- Erotic Poetry
- Your Body or Your Mind
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If I had a choice
Between your body and your mind
I would not know which to pick
To me you are so kind
Your mind helps me to cope
When my days are rough
And when your words flow from it
I just can't get enough
Your mind is special, oh so sweet
It brightens up my day
And if I had to choose
There's not much I could say
Your mind is certainly the best
If the truth be told
But it doesn't keep me warm
When the nights are cold
So between mind and body
If I must choose somehow
Give me the hot and sexy part
I want your body.. NOW!
- COMMENTS
tbabyhotalmost 13 years agoI can't believe I missed this poem, when I read others...
I liked it ! ♥
neutronaalmost 14 years agoThis poem wasn't meant to be romantic or perfect "traditional" poetry. It's cute and funny and I especially love the twist ending!
Keep writing!
sssoffteealmost 14 years agoI think your attempt is sincere, sweet, and honest, but I think you need some coaching in the art of poetry. Rhymes are nice, but they remove all the romance from the image you're trying to create. Sorry to criticize, but you did post this for us to read, huh?
