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- ZMP~ a mountain's tear drop
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ZMP~ A mountain's tear drops
The shorelines laden
of stones and sand
tear drops from
a tempered Mountain.
The river washes
them all away
or a mountain of tears,
would surely lay.
A stones ultimate quest?
That would be ...
to make it the bottom
of the deep cold sea.
Laying in the baking
sun's torturous light
wishing for water
that shines stones bright.
Beat by wind and sand
then pelting rain
the tormenting sun
will prevail again.
Hoping to be the next
stone that is cast
a millennium of waiting
for the day they 'splash'
Breaking tranquility by
shattering a liquid mirror
another mountain's tear drop
made it to the river.
- COMMENTS
dcpoet44almost 19 years agoare felt throughout the piece. i'd have to say that you saved the best for the last stanza as it is my favorite. nicely done art......don
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoZen at its best. This poem has depth that I see rising in your works Art. I really see how the nature/human correspondence revolves in the work. Thank you for another wonderful reflection...
du lac~
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Wanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years agoin the tranquil setting of a zen atmosphere makes for the magic of this poem. Just to close My eyes and picture a stone as " a mountain teardrop" inspires Me so! Each stanza unfolded yet another beautiful vision, Art. I do believe this is one of your best ZMP pieces <smile>
Vixxx
Anonymousalmost 19 years agovery good and you know i love your zmp, i will help a few of those mountain tear drops to the water now that i know that's what they want! S~
