zmp~ tanka pebbles

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from a foot step
a pebble is brought to life
until it lay still
and from this pebble's wake
other stones become moved

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
movement

divine inspired....much wisdom ...in such a small form..does it get any better...you are blessed with this one...big sigh...blue

TeeTeeTeeTeealmost 18 years ago
Tanka

time-i always enjoy reading your poems

ZMP me, i agree i liked this one a lot

thanks for sharing :)

Selkie1Selkie1almost 18 years ago
thank you

since I've been reading on this site, have thorougly enjoyed your zen - and have learned from it.

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittalmost 18 years ago
**5**

THANKYOU ZMA! I look everyday to see a ZMP and this is a very good ZMP! I like it alot, maybe allmost the best yet!!! PLEASE do some more like it!

Maria2394Maria2394almost 18 years ago
know what?

I,m not just slinging praise here, ( I dont suck up, lol) but other then the word "lay" seeming awkward, and it might be right, I dont know...besides all that

MET, I really really like this, a lot. I can feel it, like I am a pebble in motion from a careless foot. very nice work:)

maria