ZMP ~ watching blue grow

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ZMP ~ watching blue grow

I sit in the dark
as a day embarks
and watch the sky turn blue

dimming stars
as clouds emerge
a day blooms arising new

the day unfolds
night away rolls
day gives the dark a new hue

blossoming horizon
blushing suprizes
richness in red and gold turn blue

touching to see
the shade of night leave
as the day begins to unfold

from deep dark navy
to that of a baby
sitting and watching blue grow

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a special thanks to Du Lac, Lebroz and Rybka
for your insightful help in helping this poem to grow. Thank You ...Art~

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Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittover 18 years ago
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Great!!! This SO very GOOD. I see what ZMA tells when I wait out side for my ride to the job. It is true and beutiful when don comes a new day. Thankyou ZMA!!!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Well done as usual;

which just goes to show,

that even a devout Aristotelian

can appreciate a different view.....