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Click here"Well, at least now we have your uncle's permission to formally consort." Rowan whispered, gently kissing hisconcubina'snose and lips. He's a nice old bird and well educated! I even asked him what the wordléaslicmeant, what the old Moon-Woman had called Oddtus, when she saw him. He said it was an old archaic word that meant 'false', literally something that is a profound lie and against the rightful order of things. It had been used, he said, to name the first great seven wizards in an old history that he read once, the original ones that had been granted the direct power of their Goddess."
"Indeed? Well that explains much! Sleep now my love, or our pattering will wake Ayleth, and my clit is already well worn out from her attentions tonight, so let us sleep and forget our trouble for another night. Danger grows ever closer to our bow!"
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The Lady Ayleth, who wasn't quite as sleep as her friends had expected, couldn't have agreed with them more! The time for folly and willful interference was over. Like it or not, a great many thousands of people were going to depend upon her, and she couldn't keep running and crying to Rowan and Gwenda, or even the Foole for help every single time. The moment her ass set foot upon the docks of Broadmore, and when her mistress again allowed her to again wear clothes, she was going to have to put on her big-girl panties and learn how to rule! This time hopefully, wisely and honorably! Her father, if he was still yet alive, wasn't going to be able to recognize her, and the moment he again dithered about getting soldiers out to the field of battle, she was going to ride roughshod all over his indecisive ass, and lead the entire damned Duchy to war herself, if she had to! In fact, she was quite now looking forward to it!
- COMMENTS
new_readerabout 7 years agoseriously dude! you couldn't have done without the mistress and slave bit?!
hakdrakkenover 11 years agoI agree with Chuck, the story is great but the dialogue is entirely unrealistic. Yes, you can write with your own style, as others have said, but good conversation makes a story better. It needs to be back and forth, with clearly different voices.
Little late for this point, of course...
ChuckWhoopeealmost 12 years agoThe dialogue consists of small monologues as another stated earlier.
In the last paragraph you must have set a record for exclamation marks :-)
Seems you read Eragon and "legend of the seeker" as your characters are quite similar. Now even the old wizard pops up? Now I am curious as to how you get your story together.
toolman4243about 13 years agoSeems like everyone but Rowan is raking in the coin, you would have though that his buddy would have at least split the cash from the so called Viscount dude, after all he was the 1 to duel him.
