A Visitor in the Night

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He could see the juices spilling from her pussy, and he forced his eyes to focus elsewhere. He unshackled her and pulled her to her feet. He helped to steady her as she seemed a little shaky. He drew her to him and pressed his mouth to hers. To his surprise, she opened his lips with her tongue and pressed some of his hot, white cream into his mouth. She had not swallowed it. He stood there pressing her naked body to his, kissing her and sharing the white cream until he pulled away.

"Swallow the rest of my seed, slave," he ordered. She obeyed, and he watched her swallow hard. She looked at him expectantly, her body taught with excitement and exertion.

The master took her hand and led her across the dim chamber. There was a large iron bedstead in the corner. He pressed her down onto the bed until she was lying on her back. She did not try to move away as he fitted each wrist into a shackle that was attached to the curving iron headboard. He looked with new desire at the beautiful curving body, the huge breasts and wet, bare pussy. He looked at her beautiful face framed by her dark hair and at her arms spread wide, each wrist shackled to the bed. He could see that she was breathing hard and her wetness betrayed her continued arousal. There would be no more for her tonight. He had reached his release, and he would leave her shackled in the chamber till the morrow.

"You will remain here this night, my slave," he informed her. "Oden will come in at dawn and unshackle you, and a lady will assist you to relieve yourself. Oden will reposition you here, and I will find you waiting for me like this at daybreak."

He knew that her body and mind would have to calm themselves as she lay alone, shackled in the dark chamber. He would return to her in the morning to do as he pleased. The master put out the torches, lifting one from a sconce to light his way downstairs. He gave her one backward glance as he threw another log onto the fire, and the fire crackled and blazed brighter like a metaphor of the desire in the chamber. His need was sated. Hers would have to wait.

He closed the door behind him, and he knew she could hear his tread on the stairs as he retreated down the curving, stone staircase.

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femmetrishfemmetrishover 9 years ago

I too am a fan of all Miss Jones' stories. I echo the comments of the previous reader, especially her admiration of the sensuous description of the slave's womanhood and ensuing arousal.

JoyceMarieLJoyceMarieLalmost 11 years ago

Erotic desires in a totally new setting with a heavy emphasis on submission and arousal through pain; but your writing is still so literate and sensuous. So many themes stirred my own desires: the beaitiful slave responds to pain by becoming more aroused, she surrenders her body at her master's every command and he delights in taking her to a state of extreme arousal and then denying her sexual release.

The descriptions of her womanhood are so erotic: prior to the application of the hot wax ...it is described as the curve of her Venus mound and then when it is bare following the application of the hot wax......we read it bloosomed into a succulent pink flower. Later when her lips are parted.....they expose the glistening moisture between her legs.

My only complaint is it was too long since the appearance of your last story, until this one was published. Miss "stepjones", "Secret Kisses" is the gold standard of your work, but this one is very very close.

redsox04meredsox04meover 11 years ago
Well Done!

I read this with trepidation being your first in this genre,but was taken back as I should have realized you are an excellent writer, and I should have figured you can handle just about any subject. You brought out the warmth of the woman as well as the man as only a woman author can do...Bravo

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I want more

I'm not usually into whipping but this story was hot. Maybe because he wasn't just a violent prick causing harm & humiliation. I'd like for him to become obsessed, impregnate her & then work toward fisting her to prepare her for birth & anal training along the way is a must so he can still watch her face & fuck her soon after the birth.

littlefillylittlefillyover 11 years ago
Bravo!

Very well done. I have found that there are not a lot of people that can hit the mark with the right balance for this type of story... You however have done a brilliant job. Had me wet and horny with in the first chapter... Can't wait for more ;)

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