Any Chance We Could Ch. 03

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"Bathroom before bed?"

"Yes, you can go first," she said.

I returned saying "I'd forgotten how hard it is to piss with a hard on."

"It's a good thing I didn't go in there with you. I guess it would have been worse if I had been holding it for you," she said with a smirk.

I patted her on her ass as she passed me and said "You are so sexy in just panties."

She came back out shortly, no panties, saying, "Take me, handsome, you've finally sweet talked me into letting you ravish me again.

We rolled onto the bed, made love probably three or four more times and finally turned out the light. "You don't have any alarm set do you?" she asked.

"No lover I don't," as I pulled her back to me in the spoon position.

"If I can do anything for you, just poke me in the ass will you? Good night, Scott. I'm so happy we met."

"Good night, lover, so am I, so am I."

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stockingnutstockingnut5 days ago

So far this series is incredible, the hose and heels get me going every time!

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOG6 days ago

Again, and again...I LOVE THIS SERIES.

The old comments are really kinda crappy...but (15) years ago, lots of things were VERY different!! And, yet, I can very much appreciate the extensive review; the "wacka wacka waa waa Porn Video music" comment really struck home with me...shades of "Deep Throat"..."The Devil in Miss Jones"...70's and 80's porn movies!!

It may also be the time this was written...I love the pubic hair descriptions...I am much a fan of ladies who will let a bit show around their gussets like that...and that Ashley and Katrina like it also as teens... yyyaaayyy!!!!!

The teens and their curiosity...makes for anticipation...

Five**5**Stars...don't care what the others say...this is most satisfying!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I have no idea why this set of stories is rated so high. It’s some of the most boring, anticlimactic stuff I’ve read. I won’t be continuing.

wagonet2wagonet2about 4 years ago
where DO these people live?

fine chapter. makes me want to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Anon 12/26/08 pretty much covered it about the bad dialog

Plus, I'm hanging in too, so far because I like so many of the little details like the descriptions of the daughters and the woman. The sex scene was a bit sparsely described but you at least avoided many of the porny pitfalls so common on this site like having the fairly ladylike businesswoman suddenly start talking like a gutter whore for no good reason.

I realize this was submitted ages ago but it's a shame you never hooked up with an editor to proofread your work. It's not nearly as awful as most efforts on the site but when a story is managing to keep my interest, the random errors are all the more annoying to stumble over time and again.

As long as I can keep looking past the rubbish teen dialog portions, I shall continue to check this out.

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