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Rebecca froze. "Marriage? Had she meant that? Until yesterday Dawn was just her best friend. Until now she has never considered even kissing a girl. Now she has just come with a girl The idea of dating a girl, let alone loving one or marrying one! But this was not just any girl - it was Dawn! Marry her? Marry Dawn? Become Dawn's wife? But that would be so...impulsive. But... maybe it felt right? Yes - it felt right. So very, very right."

Rebecca recovered and decided - for once in her life - not to be timid when it came to relationships. She then knelt in front of Dawn, placed her hands on Dawn's and trembled as she looked into her beautiful face. "Dawn, will you marry me?"

"Yes. Yes, yes, yes, a million times yes!! I'll be your wife and you'll be mine." was Dawn's answer as they embraced and kissed.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thank-You, For A Very Lovely Story!

Hallo linda1234!

I almost stopped reading in chapter 1! ___ But I'am so glad I didn't,,, yes.

I choose not to read stories under the heading of "Lesbian Sex" that include men! ___ Now I know one half of the population is male,,, I just don't give a fuck about that half!!!

5-Stars!

Gay Kat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Cute :) first time lesbians uhaul as soon as they figure out they are gay. It does need some editing, the point of veiw gets a little confusing, I love stories that switch between characters. Their train of thought and what they are saying out loud is hard to differentiate. When they are talking it's a bit rushed, almost a run on sentence, a little conversation editing would help it flow. A little more back story about each of the women, including Linda would add a lot. Great start to a potential romantic erotic story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Eye roll

Never had a sapphic experience to “Marry me!” in one night? Suuuuuuuure.....

LcnmdLcnmdabout 9 years ago
Light and wonderful story

A very nice story to start my day!

Thank you!

L

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