Betrayed

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AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

There are certainly 'bad guys' in the tale. Of course the worst was the ex wife and ex friend - absolutely. The rest were in so much pain because of the 'bad guys', their wrongs (but not their pains) were minimized. The two ex's deserved life in front of a firing squad. Kelly was the hero. Thanks BG.

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AnonymousAnonymous13 days ago

K

The judge gave the whore the house ?

Gave it to her ... not to occupy till the devil daughter graduated and the sell and split the sale with our weak ass ex husband ...

Just GAVE it to her .

You sure love to give the filthy whores in your stories quite a lot and seldom the tiniest inconvenience.

One star .

Deserves much less

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

I really enjoyed the personal growth arc the MC went through. This is so true to life. When we are confronted with challenges, sometimes we rise and sometimes we fall. Through our failures, we have the opportunity to grow and change.

AmbulAmbul27 days ago

I liked the story, and how it worked out. I thought that Kelly was the adult in the room. What she did was very risky for her relationship with Henry, who for eight years had made an existence of self-pity, bitterness, and hate. Luckily for him Kelly forced him to confront himself, through his daughter, which she correctly perceived he still loved. Although his turnaround was very fast, it nevertheless made sense. His continued negative feelings towards his ex-wife and Tom also made sense. When Juliana and Ben moved closer to where Henry and Kelly lived, it seemed a bit of a contrivance, but it could happen and it allowed her relationship with her father to strengthen further. Kelly made Henry’s new life possible. If she had not done what she had done Henry would have died a lonely, bitter, and self-pitying husk of a man. A good story.

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

A new partner who acts the way Kelly did is not worth dealing with.

But the author, for whatever reason, wanted him to become a wimp and betray his line and himself.

Strange that some people think they have to force their way of seeing things on other people. If he no longer wants to have anything to do with his “old” family, then that is his decision.

But this is how our world has become. Where people ask for help, the global community looks the other way and where no one asks for help, everyone tries to impose their help!

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