Betrayed Ch. 03

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"It doesn't appear she is over you yet," my lover postulated.

For the first time, I detected a note of uncertainty in her voice. I abruptly pulled over to the curb and slammed on the brakes. In a fit of bravura unlike anything I had been feeling for over a week, I grabbed Dianna's arms and turned her to face me.

"I am overher," I avowed with determination. "Tonight confirmed that. She and I had been together since Senior year in high school. I was never,ever unfaithful to her. She repaid my fidelity by shacking up with the boyfriend she dumped for me. She told me she wanted to be with me because I was a 'winner' and he wasn't. I guess she decided he was the bigger winner after all."

"He's big, all right," Dianna agreed. "I don't necessarily call him a 'winner', though."

My lover held me tightly, resting her head against my chest. My faux titties pressed into the side of her head. She was quiet again, organizing her thoughts.

"I won't be faithful to you, either," she stated quietly. "I told you that already."

I anticipated that, and was ready.

"You are better than faithful," I countered. "You have beenhonest with me up front. I can now deal with your sexual appetites because we talked it over, explained our feelings for each other, and I can cope with it. They call it 'informed consent'. Susan wasn't honest with me, probably hasn't been from the start. Iknow she's fucking Jeff Spencer. Who knows how many there have been before him Idon't know about? There is no way to know, and now and I don't care to. It'sover. I have the better womanright here."

I felt her body swell at the sound of those words; hopefully, with pride. She sat upright and looked me in the eyes resolutely.

"You would chooseme over an exquisite GG likethat?" my lover queried. "Regardless of what you think she's done? I'm aho'-with a dick instead of a pussy.What if she feels the same way about cock I do? What if she is still madly in love with you, but just didn't say the words?"

"There is no 'think' about it," I avowed. "I haveseen the proof with my own eyes. If she is still madly in love with me but needed outside cock, whydidn'tshe say the words? You did.Words count,Dianna. We are not mind-readers. Sometimes, words are all we have to know what someone is truly feeling. If she didn't say the words, she couldn't have given much consideration tomyfeelings. That isn't love; that is pure, selfish hedonism. Would I choose you over her?I already have.Funny; until tonight, I never realized just howugly she really is – where it matters most."

Dianna's eyes were brimming with tears.

"So, you really believe I have been honest with you, unlike... Susan, was it?"

"Yes, it is 'Susan' and yes, I believe you."

She turned away from me to stare out the passenger window. Perhaps she didn't want me to see her cry.

"I hope you will remember that," she offered in a small voice. "Turn right."

"But home is left," I corrected.

"We're not going home yet," she asserted. "Turnright."

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pammycakes13pammycakes13almost 12 years ago

Angel, you are a fucking genius of a writer, and story teller!!!!!

AngelCherysseAngelCheryssealmost 19 years agoAuthor
Understand THIS

As always, I appreciate your constructive comments. I spent all afternoon yesterday responding to the twenty-plus e-mailed feedbacks I received from readers who understood perfectly. If I seem to dwell on this genre, it is because my fans love it. Every time I stray from the path, my ratings circle the bowl. I value the observations raised by "beesfanUK" about me being bound to a formula. In rebuttal, I can only say (s)he obviously never read "Once A Wolf", a story that was critically acclaimed, but tanked in readership because it was Sci-Fi/Adventure, not Transsexual/Cross-Dresser. I have had similar experiences with stories posted in Erotic Encounters and Incest/Taboo. Any author will tell you, from experience: you just can't please everyone. Still, I can try....

AC

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
You have a good

story going up to this point, so why ruin it with everything that Dianna wants him to do and become. Without thinking, you are fem. him and he is jumping from the frying pan into the fire.

I see the author as two choices: 1. Let him turn the tables on Dianna and leave him/her or whatever. 2. End this stroy now and start on something else.

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
I Understand

Perhaps it's the submissive in me. I didn't say I could do it, but I understand. Bring on the next chapter! You rock as an author!

beesfanbeesfanalmost 19 years ago
Misses the point.

The previous commenter misses the point. I think he/she read this story expecting to find it to be about a cheating spouse when in reality it is a tale centered around feminisation. The cheating by the wife of the male character is a device used to drive him into the arms of the, in this case, transexual who is going to feminise him. In my opinion, this writer is technically one of the most gifted submitting here. Unfortunately, the fundamentals of her stories all follow a similar pattern with central characters who are distinguishable only in peripheral terms. I.e., a dominant, essentially heterosexual woman (again, in this case a transexual) who sets out to feminise an initially confused, submissive male who accepts the process because it pleases the female character and because, ultimately, it feels like the right thing to do. I, also, because of the title and the synopsis, felt that this might be a little different but it appears to be more of the same. Of course, there can be no serious objection to the author writing whatever story she chooses - I would just like such a talented writer to maybe broaden her theme range a little. Surely, this could have been a story about a man, without a deep-seated and unrecognised desire to be a woman, who having been betrayed by his wife finds solace and genuine love in a relationship with a transexual who cares for him as a man. Then again, I freely confess my ignorance of the transexual lifestyle irl, so maybe not. To the writer, it is not my intention to cause offence with this comment. I would just really like to see you try your hand at something different.

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