Bitch Maker Ch. 04

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"Tammy, wake up baby."

I opened my eyes, the alarm said 6 a. m. and Sam was stroking my cheek.

"Let's shower." She said.

I followed her to the shower and she turned it on to get hot while we brushed. I felt some embarrassment return, standing in the bathroom removing my dress and wig with Sammie. Both of us were hard. Mine was morning wood, I wondered if hers was.

She beckoned me to get in the shower and we got in together. I shivered as the water hit me, and was delighted as Sammie's hands began to soap me up. She smiled looking at me as she lingered on my balls and asshole. I winced when she slipped one finger in me.

"Sore back there?" She asked.

"Yeah." I told her.

She kissed me and handed me the soap, I took my time on her body, and she didn't complain. There was no way I could not start jerking her off when I got to her tool. I was just fixated on it, the feel of the skin in my hand, the soap dripping off it.

Sammie sighed and leaned against the wall as I pumped her and took a nipple in my mouth. Her hand reached down and began to do me. We jerked each other for several minutes when Sammie started to wiggle her hips and moan.

"Don't you let my cum get wasted down the drain Tammy." Sammie ordered me.

I didn't need to be told twice, I kneelt and took the head in my mouth, sucking as I pumped her shaft.

Sammie moaned, "Such an eager cocksucker. You belong on your knees. Uugh, fuck! Now swallow."

I kept the head just inside my mouth while she came, I wanted all of it on my tongue. I wanted to taste it. I sucked gently as she got soft; the feel of it going soft in my mouth was wonderful.

I stood back up and she grabbed my wet dick, jerking me. She put her mouth on my neck and started sucking hard. My body tensed and I came quickly. Sammie cupped her hand under my cock and caught my load, which she put to my lips.

"Drink it bitch." She said, and I licked it from her palm and fingers. I saw she had left a large hickey on my neck as we passed the mirror, drying off. No big deal, anybody at work would assume it was a girl, worst that could happen was a boss telling me to have my girlfriend put the hickeys somewhere else.

As I was getting dressed in the guest room Sammie walked in.

"You forgot something Tammy." She said, and sat the cock cage on the vanity.

I grumbled but obeyed. It was only when I got to work and sat down at my desk that I realized my nails were still painted pink.

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thomashwhitethomashwhite12 months ago

Without chapter 3, I like this series. With chapter 3, the story is disjointed. Some parts are a personal discovery story based on mutual trust and attraction Another part is just a rape story. I can like either type of story, but a rape destroys any future parts having believable personal discovery based on trust.

With chapter 3 I think Tim needs to man up and go to the cops. Too often the rape victim doesn’t go to the police due to embarrassment, etc. However we are constantly advised that the rape victim isn’t protecting themselves but are protecting the next victim. Tim needs to think about that person.

Trust is a key to any relationship. You may forgive the initial sex that did not include Tim being advised of Sammy and Alex‘s T-girl status. In our society, that information is potentially dangerous. However, combine that with the lack of consent for drugs that make permanent changes to your body and which many T girls do not take. Most importantly wrap that up with a weekend rape featuring physical pain, humiliation, and degradation. These things prove that Sammy and Alex are not trustworthy. For all he knows they could sell him in to sadistic servitude, death, or a million other bad things. How could he he trust any assurances to the contrary.

Tim learned things about himself through Sammy and Alex, but he needs to explore those things with someone else.

That is really too bad. In the initial part of this series, Sammy and Alex appear to get consent. At the end of the series Sammy appears to be getting consent. The rape violated everything that was going on. Tim very clearly indicated no multiple times. No matter how much pleasure Tim may have gotten during it, the rape is still inexcusable. Otherwise rapists could be absolved of their rape through making sure the victim cums. Additionally, Tim’s feeling of safety in Sammy’s arms near the end of the story is not understandable without a Stockholm syndrome type of affect. Sammy has not earned that feeling from Tim.

After the rape when Tim returns ,Sammy states to Tim with “genuine concern in her voice” that he could stay there without continuing forward. This is too little too late. By that offer, Sammy acknowledges that what they did went too far. Therefore any professing of concern is not believable. After surviving a violent rape Tim very well may have physically hurt himself, gone into a depression, or a number of other bad things immediately after they released him. Where was Sam’s concern for that possibility prior to initiating the violence.

An act of violence of the level of that rape will probably create scars in Tim’s subconscious. Just the internal confusion of wanting to move forward and the reality of this bad event could be awful. You would question your own ability to make choices. Even if he forgives them, that will not make those scars go away.

sissyboi69Aricsissyboi69Aricalmost 2 years ago

I love this story, I would love to find a Sammie

savage12ksavage12kover 2 years ago

Proofreading and a little editing for punctuation would make this flow much nicer. Great story though!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Very hot and I wish I was Tim. I would love to be someone's bottom bitch.

Royse69Royse69about 3 years ago

keeps getting better

Tammy coming right along and accepting her position. I like how you write each chapter in a way you can end the story or keep going, hopefully you will keep it going.

Maybe get Alex jealous that now Tammy is taking away some of Sam's attention, so she tries to get Tammy in trouble or even hurt him. Sam has to prove she loves both of her bitches. Maybe have Tammy get pissed at Sam and move out. As Tim tries to get back to his normal life it seems boring and empty.

Sam ends up missing him and tries to manipulate him back, Tim tells Sam she is the bitch, she is so busy playing her games she doesnt see how much Alex and him truly love her. Alex comes to Tim and tells him that she doesnt only love Sam but Tammy too.

Tim calls Sam and Alex to his new place to explain to both of them his decision, when they arrive he tells them to come in. They come in and he yells from the bedroom he will be out, comes out in a dress and make up, even a cage. He tells them he knows he belongs with Sam and Alex, if they will have him.

Sam tells him punishment is coming for leaving, Tammy smiles and says thank you mistress.

SORRY, I shouldnt be telling you what to write. Its so good ideas just came to my mind

thank you

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