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Her life was a masterpiece, just like the city she loved, and nothing could ever change that. And yes, I took a little credit for that one.
There wasn't a dry eye in the place when I and our four kids joined her on the platform. The applause was loud as she kissed each child's forehead but it became deafening when she kissed me with such passion that I didn't hear the cheers and catcalls for several minutes afterwards.
That's right, I said four kids and yes, I did give her a little girl... two actually, Marie and Julianna. They're both teenagers now and look like they're going to be as tall and beautiful as their momma. As a matter of fact, Jordan and I are getting ready to go see Caleb graduate from high school.
Jordan and my marriage has changed somewhat. As she's become stronger, I've backed off some and let her bloom. She's rewarded me for that by loving me even more, as if I thought that was ever possible. Our love has matured in so many ways and it seems to be interwoven in everything we do. Of course in other ways it hasn't changed much.
Jordan's wearing her FMP's tonight and giving me a sweet impish grin. With the girls all staying overnight at a friend's house, I've got a feeling we won't be staying for any after graduation receptions. I wonder if we'll even make to my truck!
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Additional Note: The lyric quoted? If You Could Only See - recorded by Tonic. Just givin' credit where credit's due.
- COMMENTS
moultonknob1 day agoWhat is sugah? I know what sugar is ,apart from that the story is overly long and he still didn't get any revenge on his ex wife bitch.
Anonymous9 days agoThe sadness Jordan has is almost heartbreaking. You can write (type?) such beautiful prose. This and the long goodbye are your absolute best. I hope you do see this and know that your writing is very emotionally deep and it’s meant a lot to read them.
Anonymous13 days agoA truly amazing piece of writing. I think this is the first story I have read where the husband didn’t get to burn the bitch but instead Karma came along and burnt her good along with the entire fucked up friends group. This is my third time through this wonderful story and I still get just as emotional while enjoying it. It was so well written and thought out, how could the emotions not come bursting forth. This will always be a favorite of mine and I will continue to come back and reread it until either I can’t see anymore or I’m dead because to me, it is just that good.
Be well and stay safe.
GG
Anonymous21 days agoGood story, well written. It turns out he didn't BTB his ex-wife, but her lift did that to her and she was got her comeuppance. 5 stars
