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Click hereHe started to slam her cunt hard, in long strokes, going almost out of her cunt and then slamming the long thick stick deep into her wet cunt, forcing her pussy walls open with the shock of the force. She kept cumming and cumming! Her body was in the grip of ecstasy she could feel nothing but his cock pumping her hot cunt, and the waves of pleasure washing all over her body!
Her orgasm was still continuing, seemed like for ages, when his exploded deep in her cunt and shot a big load of his burning hot cum into her. She could feel his cum wet and warm as his invading cock sprayed it on her pussy walls. She could feel him still fucking her and her orgasm refused to subside.
Finally after a long time, she stopped cumming and Romeo also pulled out of her.
That night she stayed in his room. He fucked her 3 more times in the cunt and then tried to fuck her ass. But she was too tight and he was too big. He told her he will bring some cream and would fuck her ass the next day. She simply said, "Yes, Sir!". She was scared and nervous but also excited about surrendering her anal virginity to this handsome, dominant man.
But the execution is let down by poor grammar that reminds me of the "two wild and crazy guys" sketches on SNL, and practically every cliche in erotic fiction.
Everyone has different fantasies and different writing style preferences. I liked this story and thought it was a hot concept. I wish there were more like it.
i didn't think it was too bad. it does needs some work but the overall idea of the story was hot.
Whomever voted this a "hot" story should never be allowed to vote on this site again, get an editor also try a couple of rewrites before you hit the submit button.