Every Man's Fantasy Ch. 11

PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

"Yael? Of course. Congratulations on finding your mother," Solange said. "It must have been quite an adventure. I hope you'll tell me about it. ... I see Sam... er, Wildchild over there. Will you come with me to talk to her? She should at least greet her mother."

It was a reasonable request. As Tamar helped Solange try to be peacemaker between Wildchild and Galatea, the other women unloaded and sorted out the trade-goods.

Wildchild was reluctant at first but she didn't run away. She spoke to Solange for a few minutes, then the Herder chief walked over to her deputy for another chat. Solange had a considerable power of charm and must have used it all because, five-minutes later, there was a poignant moment when Wildchild and Galatea stood together and spoke politely. The estrangement between the two women was unresolved but they were civil enough to talk for a few minutes.

When she was back with the chiefs and other deputies, Solange whispered to Galatea:

"You took it very well. I'm proud of you."

"What choice did I have? She's nearly of age and while anger may drive her away forever, kindness may entice her to return."

This was a much gentler woman than the stern and proud fighter of the past. Galatea regretted giving a harsh message to Ezra for her daughter and was making up for it.

"Very wise," Solange said. "Especially now. I don't want you distracted. I think we've some keen negotiations coming up at the Cloner Fair."

"Are we ready, Ladies?"

This was Calliope, keen to get the meeting started. When everyone said "Yes" she suggest that Solange talk first.

This was out of politeness. Although Mirselene had been chief longest, Solange was chief of the largest tribe.

"No. I think I'll let Mirselene go first. I want to know what other surprises she has for us."

"Only one," she said, "though I'm sure you've already worked it out. Ezra will give you the details of your parts in the salvage operation, but I suggest it should happen during the Cloner Fair."

With this, a lively meeting began, though the general sense was agreement, with only the question of who should go with Ezra and his party. At this point, Ezra was invited to join the discussion.

As the meeting went on, the women made their exchanges and began to pack the horses and baskets. It was a short meeting all around. The Woodlanders needed to get home to prepare for their long journey to the Cloner City. The Mariners had a similar journey and also had to prepare extra accommodation for Dagma, Wildchild, Carlin and Tamar. The Herders had a short journey to transport the goods to their Northern Camp.

So, with friendly goodbyes all around (extra-friendly between Eloise and Tamar, more restrained between Wildchild and Galatea, tearful between Erin and Carlin, poignant between Ezra and his bedmates), the first members of the salvage party were loaded up with their equipment and set off with the Mariners on the two-hour trek across the hot plain to the beach settlement.

Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
6 Comments
JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorabout 7 years ago
Calm before the storm

Nice to see many resolutions - even knowing some don't last. It's that calm before the the storm feeling and I'm enjoying the anticipation.

J

DomdomainDomdomainover 8 years ago
Hooked!

11 chapters in and I'm thoroughly addicted, can't put it down. As a fellow author on this site, I can only hope to keep my readers this engaged. A fantastic effort so far, imaginative and compelling. The characters have drawn me in and the ever-changing circumstances keep me guessing. Great work!!

Dom

JasonRTaylorJasonRTayloralmost 9 years ago
Another winner

So many details so well done!

This chapter really brought out some great personalities and resolved some conflicts that could have been really bad for the tribes... for everyone really.

Keeping Ezra away from the cloners was masterful.

Thanks for writing!

Jason

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

MORE MORE MORE!!!

TerrytheTravelerTerrytheTravelerover 9 years ago
A fine yarn

I like the story a lot. It has me wondering though, how can you keep the roles and relationships of so many characters straight. There have to be over 25 characters named all together and their names, titles, relationships, skills, like and dislikes makes a heck of a database. Spreadsheet much?

Thanks,

Show More
Share this Story

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Similar Stories

Font of Fertility Ch. 01 Jeremiah finds out about his magic dick.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 001 Mike inherits an old house. There's a nymph in the tub!in NonHuman
Genie Chronicles Ch. 00: Prologue Jack solves a puzzle box & is rewarded.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Three Square Meals Ch. 001 An unexpected tip changes a man's life completely.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Endangered Ch. 01 A young dragon awakens.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
More Stories