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Click here"Yes," she answered in a breathy voice. "I'll give you one more try." What the hell, she thought. He really did give her great fucks—always had. A wondrous dick. A good marriage too; it hadn't been her idea to change any of that. He had just been putting it into the wrong places. But she wasn't quite finished getting her pound of flesh for that.
"In the shower, maybe? You always liked it in the shower."
"Sure, why not?"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years agoIF he's at all clever he understands her motivations and videos their fucking.(Because that's what they're doing - fucking. Not making love). He should be in this to bury her and her lover Christina. (That was a little too obvious). At that point he gets all the visitation he wants and moves on. leaving her with her lover. I'm thinking she's not going to be too happy about that. The other possibility is to just pick up and head for somewhere a long ways away and start over. Pretty easy for a good lawyer to do. He must see that she's screwing with him. Poor ending
patientleealmost 10 years agoI liked this one a lot. The twist was well concealed until the end. I love a good twisted ending!
AMoveableBeastalmost 10 years agoIgnore the scores on this piece. No, actually, fuck the scores.
Beautiful and poignant and painfully modern, this story was like a snapshot through the window of fiction into the modern western home: a house full of pain, and confusion and an unstoppable need for connection and self-validation in a society that offers little of either. It captures admirably the games that we play, with the ones we love and with ourselves.
I thought it was great. Really. I wish there were more.
sheabluealmost 10 years agoNice use of the song lyrics. It seemed to fade a bit at the end, but nicely written. The POV switch at the end was a little awkward. I like the gradual discovery of where their lives had led them. Interesting.
