Flames of Necessity Pt. 11

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"See what'll become of you, should you fail in your duties to Prudence young man... and maybe it'll be your fate too, just the same." Even at this distance, and in the fading light, they could see a large cabin door open as Prudence strutted across the quay to greet the visitor, two slender feminine shapes stepping out, and standing either side of the door, dressed in uniform trouser suits, tightly fitted to express the grace of their femininity. A tall and elegant figure emerged after them, and those women who'd had the blessing of her company before, began to applause; those new to the experience following suit. Miles felt his rigid cock pulse wantonly, as the distant figure smiled up at her audience, and the smug smiles of those women in the know, cut into him as he turned to watch their applause.

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EmirusEmirusalmost 5 years ago
World cruise?

It’s been so long I thought you’d been on a world cruise, or maybe two. I do enjoy reading your stories and your style of writing. Plus, of course, the majority of ladies not being the usual “sexy young bitches” but more “normal” for mature ladies.

My only criticism, and it doesn’t just apply to you, is when a story has a lot of chapters I forget who is who sometimes. Sometimes you can get three or four chapters which are a story themselves whilst still remaining within the overall storyline. I was reading an interesting and enjoyable story but by the time it got to chapter 16 I found I wasn’t desperate to read the next chapter and then stopped reading altogether and it is now several chapters further. But I’ve lost the inclination and don’t want to go back to pick up the thread.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Can't wait to see what happens to Miles

And seeing Li again was worth the wait. It's been an ambitious plot. I do kind of wish some characters we don't see as often, like Thelma, could be combined, am having trouble picturing what they look like. Prudence, Suzie, Li, those are good characters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Is there no

end to this tedious story. Please give it up and try something different.

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