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Best one yet! Love the philosophical examination of the meaning of sage powers. Please do a sequel. SS
I was a few chapters back and am bingeing to catch up, and you brought up something I've been wondering about when you mentioned his mostly useless mentor... where has that little flying pest gone? Did I miss a chapter?
Uh - Harry Houdini was a debunker, calling out charlatans to use slight-of-hand to convince people they were doing magic.
Arthor Conan Doyle was a true believer, he would better fit in Esmerelda's tale...
I had the same thought as the previous comment about scaling up the rune concept over a larger territory. If you are concerned about giving him too much power too early, have him try the whole continent and find it will take too much power to implement it or have it be overwhelming to sense that much sexual energy all over the continent at once. So then have slowly scale up the size of the runes like the previous comment as his power increases. Another thing he can do is donate sperm to a fertility clinic. If Ndia could offer to store his sperm for after her current pregnancy, then storing it in a fertility clinic should work too. And then everyone wins.
You’ve hooked me on the plot 😂 wonderful story and characters. I agree that the main character feels a bit unintelligent, he should be experimenting far more. If he can cast a rune around a house to accumulate power, why hasn’t he tested those limits? A city block? A whole city? All of his territory, which encompasses North America? He knows he’s in danger and requires magical reserves to defend himself, but so far he’s prioritized so poorly. That said, I eagerly await updates!