Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
"—and I suppose you will probably go there through the portal in your backyard." Death set the paper down on the desk and picked up the pen. "Ah, yes. If I draw the gate right here, then I have participated in map making, too!"
"Wait, what?" Mike leaned forward in his chair as Death drew an arched gateway with iron bars. "Death, that's just the gate in the backyard, it doesn't go anywhere."
"You are wrong, Mike Radley. I may not be knowledgeable in many things, but I certainly recognize a portal to the Underworld when I see it." He drew a cartoon skull over the bars. "I assumed you knew this already, which is why I said getting there was easy. If not for that gate, I would have called your task impossible."
Stunned, Mike sat with his mouth open. Could Death be right? Was the unassuming gate in the backyard really the answer to his problems?
"It is very rude to stare, Mike Radley." When Death scowled, the temperature in the room dropped dangerously and the twin fireballs in his sockets went from blue to red.
"I'm not staring, I'm...is this a joke? You're absolutely serious, the gate in the backyard is a portal?"
"Mike Radley, if there's one thing you should know about me, it's that I'm always dead serious." Death picked up his tea and sipped it with a smug grin. "Now that is a proper joke."
I hope you all really liked that scene, because it was one of the more difficult scenes to write. Sofia scenes require a certain amount of respect in their approach, and I appreciate any good feedback you can offer me (for next time).
Thanks to all my beta readers for helping me through this chapter, I am gearing up to start writing the next one in the days ahead. I'm hoping the world calms down a bit in the near future, but my good buddy Death assures me that his sibling is quite the cunt and finds the whole thing very amusing.
As always, don't forget to rate, review or comment. I love reading them, especially when the struggle is real. I appreciate the Lit community and all that it has done for me and would like to reiterate that, at some point, the story of Mike Radley will come to an end.
And when it does, that chapter and all those in between will see these pages.
Take care of yourselves, be kind to each other, and wash your damn hands. Annabelle out.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous9 days agoSo glad to see Sophia finally getting some more loving... You did a great job of hunting at the buildup and mild jealousy in the last two or three chapters. She's clearly super into him and I'm hoping for more of them in the upcoming chapters.
Anonymous13 days agoIt doesn't matter if Mike is a slut. He is the main character of the story. Or was. It's going the route of the Witcher or the mandelorian . Start with a male lead then transition the entire thing to a female lead and refocus the story. Sure it may really be about a house for horny monsters but it all started with Mike and took many chapters focused on Mike and his way through it. Now it's not. His scenes are lame. Their scenes go on and on and on. Saying Beth fucjs anything isn't calling her a slut. It's what she is doing without any type of real connection. Just fake connections. Mike actually really does care about some of these connections. They are as real to him as they are with who he is doing it with. Hers are to get her rocks of and is treated as such by the characters that have been with her. Just there to fuck too. Just to fuck doesn't create a good story line. Connections do
Anonymousabout 2 months agoI have read many books in my time, and I will read many more before I’m done, but I can say without a shadow of a doubt that this is one of the best books I’ve read in this genre. The characters are immaculate, the story is lively and always turning and turning keeping my mind occupied with all of those beautiful threads you keep forming. I savor each chapter and despite me never commenting before and quite possibly never after this, I just wanted to let you know that I fully intend to read every word you have posted on here, for it is just that good.
