- Non-Erotic
- Hunters Ch. 06
- Page 3
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"You don't suppose that's..." Max said, his eyes twinkling. Anders followed his finger and saw the light as well.
"That's not Rudolf you moron. That's a fuckin' cop."
"Oh," Max said. He sighed heavily and leaned back; for a second, Max looked disappointed.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 17 years agoVery nice so far. Be careful with the next chapter. The story is starting to thin out and may lose direction if you are not careful. There was no apparent reason for Morgan to save the TV station. Anders us falling short as a foil and we still don't know her very well. The conversation with the priest was a good idea but it would have been better to have that conversation with Anders so there would be "call back" opportunities during their interactions. There was no action follow through to on Morgan's part to his conversation with the priest.
Anonymousover 18 years agoi can't wait till the next story maby he could have a fight with spike hand the gang next but i realy like how its all tied up in cowboy bebop
