Lost Empire Ch. 45

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Pars001
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Gregor's mouth dropped agape, the empress!? "As we both know I am not leading this so called rebellion. I am to meet her soon. I thought you might like to be a party to what is said. Am I assuming that you would your majesty?" Derrick asked of Gregor.

Still in shock Gregor could only nod as he cradled the recording tightly. In a low whispered voice he stated, "I knew that she hated me for what happened to our daughter. I never thought she would take her hatred to this level."

"So, for an old man you aren't as stupid as I thought." Came a female voice from deeper in the computer complex. Derrick immediately reached up touching his chest. "I guess I will have to just kill the both of you, that way I can blame it on the stranger. A relative that was jealous of the emperor!" With an evil laugh she lifted an energy weapon.

"I should warn you that if you fire that, you might be hit by the ricochet. I therefore advise against it." Derrick told the empress. Looking at Derrick as if he was crazy her finger tightened on the trigger.

"Just like a man trying to bluff his way out of death!" With another evil laugh she pulled the trigger even as a man was shouting behind her.

"Rella! Stop it's too dangerous!" The man was yelling even as the beam of energy was heading toward Gregor. Damn it! Derrick thought as he dived in front of Gregor the beam striking his shield and bouncing back.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Chapter length

Please do not let those who are complaining about the length of the chapters

Get to you

The storie is great and on here free

If they want more to read in a day they should go and buy a book

Thankyou for the great story i look forward to all the chapters

gregsjlngregsjlnover 6 years ago
longer plz

As the others have said your chapters are pretty short, entertaining but short I've read a few of your stories and have started following you but I read your 45 chapters in two days- plz keep them coming.

PrettyVirgo24PrettyVirgo24over 6 years ago
Please

Please make the chapters longer your killing me here

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Story length

I disagree with many of the complaints about stories being to short. Since the first chapter at the end of May there has been constant stories coming out every 1-5 days and every one of them has been about 1 1/2 pages and this story is amazing. Please keep up the good work Pars001.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yes write more

I agree with Alun the story is solid and enjoyable but the shortness of them is bloody annoying focus on one story at a time. Write longer characters. Telfer is awesome so is this but make it longer

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