My Fallen Archangel

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"You're going to pay for what you did to my woman," Raziel said angrily, and I thrust my sword through his chest, and he pulled out. Raziel cried out and fell. Like any Angel, he would heal from injuries, but he wouldn't be any good for a while. I watched my second adversary fall out of the sky, and my heart soared with triumph. Like I said, of the Archangels, my brother Michael has always been the fighter. Looks like I can handle my own against the likes of Kushiel and Raziel...

"Gabriel, my friend, you've chosen the wrong side, I wish it didn't have to be this way," Barachiel said, smiling sadly. I faced my friend-turned-enemy, and shook my head. Once upon a time, Barachiel and I were like brothers. We both fell from heaven, but we were always the reasonable ones among the fallen. Now he's become the stuff of nightmares, and I have to stop him...

"Go to hell," I replied, and I came for Barachiel, sword held high, ready to decapitate him. Barachiel smiled, and clapped his hands, and seemingly out of nowhere, a dozen Angels came out of the ether, brandishing heavenly weapons. I took a look around and realized that I was surrounded. Clearly, I had underestimated Barachiel's forces. There was simply no way I'd get out of this alive...

"Gabriel, my poor, sweet and deluded Gabriel, we're going to bring Hell to earth," Barachiel said, smiling beatifically, the way we both did, once upon a time, as we praised God in the Kingdom of Heaven. I looked at my old friend, wondering how on earth I could have failed to see him for what he is. Another deluded maniac with wings who hates humanity with a passion...

"Over my dead body," I replied, and I swung my sword at Barachiel, and he casually blocked my blow with his own angelic weapon, a formidable battle-axe. I got ready to launch myself at him, and that's when I felt a sickening impact, that of a spear thrown by an angel I never saw coming. I turned around and saw Kushiel, looking badly burnt, her once-beautiful face a mask of hate, as she twisted the spear in my abdomen...

"Fine by me, Gabriel, go die with the filthy mortals you love so much," Kushiel said angrily, and that's when I screamed, filled with elemental pain, and began to fall. As I dropped toward the distant ground like a rock, I found myself thinking about my life, every epoch of it, since this may very well be the end. And you want to know what I thought about right before I crashed and lost consciousness? Sadiya Nomiye's lovely face, and the feel of her lips against mine...

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Started good but bad place to end a short first chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not bad not bad.

Good work hope to see much more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
lol

better trump than the known criminal, who under Title 18 law regarding the destruction of government records is barred from holding any future office.

https://www.justice.gov/usam/criminal-resource-manual-1663-protection-government-property-protection-public-records-and

Subsection (b) of 18 U.S.C. § 2071 contains a similar prohibition specifically directed at custodians of public records. Any custodian of a public record who "willfully and unlawfully conceals, removes, mutilates, obliterates, falsifies, or destroys (any record) shall be fined not more than $2,000 or imprisoned not more than three years, or both; and shall forfeit his office and be disqualified from holding any office under the United States." While the range of acts proscribed by this subsection is somewhat narrower than subsection (a), it does provide the additional penalty of forfeiture of position with the United States.

but no biggie right?

masterhobbesmasterhobbesover 7 years ago
Really good

Shows tons of promise but a bit too short. I hope you continue.

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