My Forever Love

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Her skin tasted sweet, perfect, her scent swirling around his head caused further swelling as he dragged his fangs down from her neck over to her breast and sucked her nipple into his mouth. It was an urge, a craving, he needed to mark her with his fangs the same way she did to him, his fangs dug into her nipple and drew a sharp cry from her. Her nails digging into his head, he pulled back with a bloody grin making her quiver with desire.

His cock pulsed painfully hard as he slid down her body, he would do this, then claim her, she couldn't be allowed to think that he would let her control him like a toy, he swooped in and lashed his tongue over her folds, she arched up and screamed as he dragged his fangs ever so slightly down her folds. His tongue pushed in roughly while his lips sucked her clit mercilessly, she cried out and bucked under him, her sharp nails dug into his shoulders harshly.

He grunted from the bite of pain he needed to reign in the hard throbbing in his cock. He quickly dug his fangs into her clit and sucked hard, drawing streams of blood out of her marking her in the same way she did to him, she screamed as her orgasm squeezed her tightly and burst free. Once he released her clit he quickly slid up her and slipped inside of her with a primal growl, digging his sharpening nails into her shoulders and thrust into her, rubbing against her clit hard and ruthlessly as he thrust in.

Kane was going to kill her from the pleasure she thought as she was sucked along for the ride, she dug her nails into his back and wrapped her legs around his forcing him to move faster. This time she could feel the hot and hard ridges of his abs brush against her skin unfettered by her dress, she let go of his back and reached around in front and scraped his nipples. He jerked against her and half growled, half howled as she squeezed them.

He cursed to himself, he couldn't handle the pressure it destroyed his control, once she squeezed his nipples he exploded, roaring as he thrust harder in to her. Each wrenching pulse inside of her was heaven and hell all at once as inferno heated daggers stabbed every inch of his body with dynamite pleasure, she dug her nails into his hips and her fangs into his neck as she came around him squeezing him tightly making his own release even more devastating. He collapsed against her and panted raggedly, wrapping his arms around her wanting to absorb the feeling of completeness.

***

When he woke, he looked down at the woman curled up in his embrace, nothing had ever felt so right before his body was half numb by the shattering orgasm he endured earlier. He would do anything to keep it the way it was, he didn't want to lose this feeling of connection, he stroked his fingers over her face as she shifted against him. "Morning, Alina," he growled.

She shuddered at the sound of his voice, it rolled right over her, "Morning Kane,"

Kane looked at her wrapped in his arms, she was radiantly beautiful. He knew right now he wouldn't be able to handle it if she left him, he had never felt such bone-deep desperation in his life, he needed to control the situation. "Move in with me Alina, I want to get to know you better," he said into her ear brushing his fangs along her neck.

She shuddered at the subtly worded command, she had no doubt that he'd make it happen if she refused even though she could probably kick his ass in a fight, "Mmm, I think more than that, typical male, of course I'll move in, besides if you hadn't asked I would have kidnapped you and taken you to my apartment," she said grinning.

"It's strange I hate days like those, always seem to make me depressed, then this happened, who would have thought the day my ex-girlfriend broke up with me would be the day I find a special woman. I just feel this insanely strong connection to you that I don't want to give it up or you,"

"I know, I've been searching for a man like you for centuries Kane, I'm happy I finally found you,"

"Centuries? How old are you?" asked Kane surprised.

"474, and I hope the next 474 years and hundreds more after that are with you,"

"Glad I'm not going to be feeling left out anymore all my friends are in relationships,"

"It will take some adjusting though, vampire senses are greatly improved upon your human ones," she said and leaned in to kiss him gently,

"We'll figure it all out together, this will be a intriguing challenge, but I'll be able to adapt to it considering that I'll have you in my life. Everything is finally going to stop being so dark," he said and returned her kiss. He smiled at her and said, "Belated Happy Valentine's Day."

"You too, now we have something to celebrate," she said and burrowed against him curling her arms around him.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very Nice

You know for having almost no dialogue for the first page this was very well done. Usually if there is no dialogue and just full narration I just move on but this was very well done kept my attention.

ShyChiWriterShyChiWriterabout 13 years ago
Great Characters

Great Characters, well told. Congrats on a really good story!

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSabout 13 years ago
Quite enjoyable

I liked the characters and the twists on the average vampire story. I think it would have been a GREAT story if it had some better editing. Some grammar problems but mostly the run on sentences and a few nonsensical sentences that were the only stumbling block. The raw attraction and intensity make it fun. Thank you and keep writing I would like to see whats next for you. Good luck with the contest.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSabout 13 years ago
Quite enjoyable

A fun story with light and darker elements, and likable characters. But the punctuation and run on sentences can make it a bit frustrating to read. There are a few nonsensical sentences in the last bit of the story also. It' s mostly really good and you show great promise please keep writing it was a fun little adventure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

This was a good story with characters that are easy to like; however, the grammar needs to be edited. I found myself wanting to skip whole paragraphs due to run-on sentences and bad punctuation. If you could have it edited, or do it yourself, this would be 5 times better.

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