Pool Boy Ch. 35

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When we were back downstairs in the meeting room another round of drinks was had by all. They had sobered up some from the time upstairs but they were right back to bombed by the time they finished this last drink. I watched as panties were dropped into purses. I had put mine in my jacket pocket. Amanda came over and gave me one of her cards. She noted the cell phone number and urged me to call her sometime. I took her card and smiled but I had no intention of ever calling her. I was however interested in calling Crystal sometime. I knew for a fact that Alexis would be horny for her and vice versa. I paid some extra attention to her as we finished our drinks. She didn't offer her card. I let it be. I knew how I could get contact information for her anyway.

When the meeting broke up Rachel came over to me and asked if I was okay to drive. She knew she wasn't and a person in her position getting a DUI was unacceptable. I told her I was fine. We went outside and stood on the top stair waiting for the valet to bring her Mercedes around. He held the door for Rachel and I got behind the wheel. Before we got out of the circular driveway, Rachel's hand was dragging my zipper down and pulling my cock out into the cold air. In the next instant, Rachel was on her knees on her seat draped over the center console pushing her face into my lap gobbling on my stiff cock. She already had experience with the size of my shaft and she stretched her lips over the tip and pushed down until she gagged. I eased up on the gas pedal and groaned from her aggressive attack. She was obviously horny from just watching tonight. She wanted my cum and I wanted to give it to her.

Rachel was furiously sucking my cock and started coughing. She pulled off and cleared her throat. She pressed her lips on the glans and began jerking me off with one hand. I could feel that familiar sensation closing in and I put my hand on the back of her head and held her in place as I began rocking my hips to force more cock into her mouth. I knew where her gag point was. I pulled up to her cast iron gate just as I knew I was going to cum. She was moaning around my cock. I had never held a woman's head on my cock to force her to take my load but it seemed appropriate now.

I put the car in park and tipped my head back and started groaning as cum boiled over and shot up my shaft into Rachel's mouth. She didn't have much experience sucking cock and she was caught off guard. The first shot blasted right into her throat and she gagged and began coughing. I held her as she struggled to pull back. The second shot filled her mouth with cum and she couldn't handle that either. I let her head go and she pulled back. The third shot hit her between her eyes and across her cheek to her ear. She was still gagging and coughing. She didn't know what to do with the rest of my load but she didn't want it in her face so she held my cock pointing straight up.

The remaining three shots blew past her face to the roof and most of that fell back into Rachel's hair and the back of her suit jacket. She groaned this time because she knew where the cum was going and she didn't want to get busted by Mitch again. She reached her hand up into her hair and pulled it back covered with cum. She reached into my jacket pocket and pulled my boxer shorts out and wiped her face, hair and clothes with them. She had no idea if she was getting it all but she wiped the boxers everywhere she could imagine cum would have landed.

She sat up and realized we were at her gate. She pressed the button and I put the car in gear. Rachel reached down with my boxers and wiped my cock off before pushing it back in my pants and zipping up. I pressed the button to open the garage door and drove right in to the stall. Rachel turned on the visor mirror light and examined her face and hair as well as she could. She finally shrugged her shoulders and pushed open her door. I turned off the engine and got out.

Upstairs in the hallway, Rachel leaned in and kissed me. She said, "Would it be possible to request a play-date for the two of us or even the three of us?" I chuckled to myself because I was thinking 'or the four of us?'

I said, "I'll talk with Alexis. I know she enjoyed our last time together. I'll let you know."

"Will you tell Alexis about tonight?"

I said, "I'll tell her every little detail. She was pretty sure that you knew what would happen. Before I left, she told me to make her proud. She'll be sorry she missed it all. She'll be so horny; she'll probably fuck me till dawn." I laughed. "You did know what would happen tonight, right?" She hesitated a moment and then looked at me and nodded.

Rachel said, "I envy your relationship. The next meeting of our group is at Crystal's house. Before we left, she begged me to get both of you there. The others would probably balk at woman on woman sex but not Crystal." She hesitated a moment and then continued, "Not me either."

She pressed her tits against me again and we kissed. I told her I'd call her.

She opened the door to the main part of the house and disappeared through it. I walked through the apartment to our bedroom. Alexis was sitting up in bed reading one of her text books. She looked up when I came in. She had a sly little smile on her face as she said, "Well, was I right?" I grinned and nodded. "Well get those cum stained clothes off and tell me everything." She put her textbook on her nightstand and plumped up her pillows and settled down for the story.

Before the lights went out, Alexis had two orgasms: one was self-induced in the middle of my story and one was perfectly synchronized with my third orgasm of the night as I pumped cum deep in her pussy. We quickly showered and slid into a spoon position. I kissed Alexis' neck and was nearly asleep when Alexis said, "Oh. I nearly forgot. Your coach called. You have to be at practice at six in the morning. He said he's having two-a-days again."

I groaned from the news as I grabbed the alarm clock and set it for five AM. I snuggled up close to her back and said, "I'd rather have two-a-day's with you."

She giggled as she waggled her ass on my soft cock and said, "I'm thinking of going to three-a-day's with you." I chuckled and kissed her on the neck as she waggled her ass again. I fell asleep just like that with her right tit cradled in my left hand.

The alarm woke us in the morning and we both groaned. Alexis still had two hours of sleep time and she promptly fell back asleep. I sat on the edge of the bed and stretched my muscles before getting up. I staggered to the bathroom and then to the kitchen. I got the Keurig Coffee Machine going and made a cup of my favorite brew. I carried it back to the bedroom and set it on the counter in the bathroom. I prepared for the day as I drank my coffee. I dressed and got my things together and went down the stairs to the garage. Before I jumped in the van I just stood there for nearly a minute in the ultra quiet before the day time sounds started. The air was still and cold. I could see my breath from every exhale. I stopped at my favorite fast food restaurant for a breakfast sandwich on my way to practice.

As I drove into the parking lot by the Field House, I was thinking about last night and Crystal in particular. Her beauty had affected me. Her early life's story was similar to Emma's and thinking about Emma made my dick harden. I parked and grabbed my duffle and caught up with a couple other teammates grumbling about 'what the fuck was this about'. I wasn't happy about it either but I understood the position Coach was in. We had stopped practices all together when our regular season was over and we hadn't been selected for a Bowl Game. I kept on working out with weights and resistance training but was not in game shape. None of us were. The Coach planned to rectify that with two-a-days until we were ready. The Coach didn't want to just play the game like Rachel. He wanted to win it and so would every one of his players, once they heard the news, even though it meant a lot of soreness and pain. We had two weeks till game day, which meant I would be right here through the first week of Christmas vacation and Semester Break.

In the locker room, Coach explained everything and the guys were high-fiving, low-fiving and any other kind of 'fiving' one could think of. I of course already knew the details because I was balling the Chancellor. I thought back to her blow-job last night on the way home. Dean came over and sat down as he slapped me on the back. He was all grins from the news. He noticed my reverie and wanted to know what was up. I smiled and avoided his question by asking him how he and Josie were doing. His face lit up like a Christmas tree. Now he had a far off look in his eyes as he was obviously reliving a fond memory. He broke his reverie and said, "We're fantastic; getting serious though. She started talking about kids. Uuggghhh. Does Alexis ever bring up kids?"

I shook my head and said, "Not yet," and following Coach's directions, ran out on the field. We started from the beginning with wind sprints and calisthenics until every last one of us was lying prostrate on the ground. The Cheerleaders were practicing across the field. Coach Hannah was drilling them just as hard. I could hear her barking like usual from across the field. One thing was different though. Mindy was lined up in the head Cheerleader position and April wasn't even there. There was political intrigue in the air and I made a point of finding out the details from Mindy.

In the locker room after practice, Coach gave us our practice schedules for seven days a week. We would have Christmas Eve and Christmas day off. He admitted that he hated to lose those three practice sessions but he had no choice in the matter. The Athletics Director had the word passed down from on high, which meant the Chancellor's Office.

I was just getting to my van when I spotted Mindy getting into her car a few slots away. I walked over as she slammed her door. I wrapped on the window and nearly scared her to death. She rolled down her window and in response to my questions she told me all about the Politics of Cheerleading.

In a nutshell, Coach Hannah and April had a fling going. That was how every Head Cheerleader got that position until the shit hit the fan. That night that Alexis and I were supposed to join Hannah in a sexual romp but had arranged the orgy to get out of it, Hannah and April were supposed to 'get together' before for a private celebration on winning the championship. April never showed up because she was literally fucking Morgan with "a strap-on dildo that rivaled my cock" was the way Mindy described it. Coach Hannah was furious with April for standing her up even though she wound up getting way more sex than she could handle shortly after their scheduled tryst. April got mad and told Hannah she was done with her. She was with someone else. Hannah retaliated by relieving April of her Head Cheerleader position and kicking Morgan off the team. April retaliated by going to the Athletics Director and then quitting the team. Hannah was disciplined but was allowed to keep her position as coach, pending 'regular reviews'. Rumor had it that those reviews always happened the day after Hannah gave the Director a blow-job and if the Director found out Hannah had a new squeeze, she was to bring her along the next time. Secretaries do like to talk. Mindy became the first Head Cheerleader that was not sharing Coach Hannah's bed.

I was distracted in classes all day reliving Mindy's story. Alexis would get a huge kick out of it. Alexis was back-and-forth on April. She didn't trust her for a second but April made her horny.

At home that night, before I could bring up Mindy's story Alexis told me that Coach Hannah had called her. I held on to my story to find out what Hannah wanted. Alexis said, "She told me all about how April had become a problem with her incessant hitting on the other members of the team. Several had complained to her about it. She had no choice but to dump her. Then she offered the vacant position on the team to me. She told me that I would be Head Cheerleader in no time. I laughed at her. I get the feeling that people don't laugh at Hannah. She started yelling at me over the phone: I'm a slut; I undercut her in the Dean's office with the 'SH5'. She knew that I had set up the orgy thing. To that last comment I told her "you're welcome". I finally just hung up on her. What a whack-job she is?" I laughed and then told her what Mindy had told me. She was nearly rolling on the floor she was laughing so hard.

Alexis said, "I'm kind of sorry for April but she made that bed; and Morgan just got caught in the middle. I feel bad for her but I don't get the whole Cheerleading thing anyway."

I said, "Says the Head Cheerleader of the 'SH5'."

She playfully swatted me on the arm and said, "That's not the same thing; and I'm sorry that got so out of hand. Incidentally, the Dean called again about the University sending the 'SH5' to the Bowl Game. He gave me a budget for new outfits if we want." She giggled and continued, "The Dean was actually relieved to say 'SH5' instead of the "Smoking Hot Five" name that caught in his throat the first time he called. I told him I'd let him know after I talked to the other girls." She giggled again and said, "I think the Dean has a crush on me."

I responded, "If he has eyes and isn't gay, I would say 'you're probably correct'. By the way speaking of the Dean, the Chancellor is requesting a play-date; to use her words. What should I tell her?"

Alexis' smile screwed into a frown. "Houston, we have a problem. Mitch called my cell phone today to tell me she is getting her cast removed tomorrow and she wanted to celebrate her new freedom. She wondered if she could request a play-date; to use her words. She used the exact same words as her mother. Odd; don't you think?"

It could have been a coincidence but I didn't think so. What were those two up to?

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Well, the way I see it, you're at a very fortunate and advantageous point in this story.

You could go one of two ways, largely because you've played with both of these sides since the beginning. (By the way, I intend for the following to be entirely constructive and supportive. I have really enjoyed this series! Please understand that I do not intend anything to be overly critical or negative.)

1) Write one or two more chapters that just involve "straight fucking". Don't worry too much about the plot or the characters, just more dicks and tits and squirting... and then wrap up the story. You've established that Hunter has the biggest dick ever, and that Alexis is the hottest girl ever, and everyone is fucking everyone. That's fine, but has a finite interest level. Even then, it's not a problem, but if that's what you're interested in writing, then I would suggest wrapping this one up, and putting your talents into creating an entirely new story.

2) You've laid a really good foundation with a lot of good characters, circles, and scenarios. There is definitely a lot more story that COULD be told here, but it's almost too spread out at this point. You've done a really good job of developing the relationship between Hunter and Alexis (honestly, I was about to give up on this series until they started dating), but that doesn't seem to be going anywhere. In the meantime, their interactions with everyone else are pretty much just sexual, and little more. IF that's what you want for your characters, then you've done a great job of that, but there's probably not much more to write.

Point in case: Alexis' family is obviously all very close, but it seems that their only passtime or common interest is sex. In fact, there were several chapters in there where Hunter had sex with Emma more often than Alexis. The problem is that while those scenes were definitely hot and well-written, they don't really add to Hunter and Emma's relationship. Those hot sex scenes-- while very good in themselves-- don't lend themselves to a sustainable story series.

Related to this, I think Hunter's "stable" is getting a bit large. This is my personal opinion, and you (most importantly) and others may disagree. I personally prefer stories with a consistent, polyamorous set of characters. And if they ended doing a fair bit of screwing on the side, that's also hot. You've done a spectacular job of laying that foundation between The Couple and Alexis' family... but again those secondary relationships seem a bit shallow at this point.

My personal opinion of where you should go with this story is to develop the relationships between The Couple and EITHER Dee/ Jarrod or April/ Morgan (or eventually both). You've committed to having them stay at University for Christmas Break (I very much like the football sub-plot, by the way), which is fine... but as some one else mentioned, the ex-cheerleaders may now need a place to stay.

Maybe they become the SH7. Maybe April ends up working for Rachel to pick up some extra money. Maybe April turns to Alexis for friendship after breaking up with Hannah. There are only a handful of scenes of Alexis without Hunter, and they're all strictly sexual. This may be a good time to see Alexis develop a strong relationship that is more than just sexual (but definitely don't loose the sexual. April is hot!). They currently have an interesting dynamic of being attracted to each other, but not really liking each other. So if you don't want to mess with that, maybe Morgan? One way or the other, my suggestion is to have more of a bond than Hunter's giant dick.

Alternatively (or maybe later), have Alexis and Hunter spend a month or so of Summer vacation with Dee and Jarrod in Europe. They could really bond emotionally and personally (as well as sexually, obviously), and it would sell the relationship a bit more. Maybe have Emma meet a decent guy who doesn't understand her relationships at first, and have him slowly come around. That may not be a good idea given the pace and theme of the series, but it would provide a source of conflict that would also advance the story.

Anyway, I've droned on enough about how you should write your story... which is to say, it's your story, you should write what you enjoy. In the meantime, thank you for what you've done! It's been great so far! Whether you continue this series, or decide to start a new one, I will definitely be following you in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Im hoping our dynamic duo starts working on the uni pools for swimming and diving in the spring semester.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More please

I disagree with the other anonymous. Keep it going this story still has legs, either that or wrap up the Pool Boy series and start up a new series focused on the adventures of Hunter and Alexis, which Pool Boy has become now they are in college.

Really, the only thing I have to criticize is it is getting hard to keep track of all of the various characters. Some other authors on Literotica who write stories with tons of characters have addressed this by doing one of two things:

1. They put a list of the recurring characters with brief descriptions which will be or were featured in that chapter at the beginning or end of the chapter, or...

2. They keep a running list of major characters with brief descriptions in the series always at the end of the chapter so as not to interfere with the story and then copy and paste that to the end of each chapter making updates to their character's descriptions as needed. If they do this they clue in their readers with a one sentence blurb that their list or roll call of characters follows the end of the chapter.

One author in the comments of one of their stories wrote how they used this also as a means to keep track of all the characters they created for their stories, as they also had a day job which sometimes interfered with their writing for long stretches at a time.

The descriptions usually note connections to other characters and sometimes physical descriptions of the characters themselves.

Glad to see an orgy, I mean party is being planned for Dean and the Smoking Hot Five by Alexis and Hunter in their quarters at Rachel and Mitch's mansion, and that Rachel, Mitch and Crystal will likely get to "play" with Hunter and Alexis again.

Would love to see Dean and Josie move into one of the other rooms to join Hunter and Alexis, as there are 4 rooms and it looks like Hunter and Alexis are only using two of them. It would also be cool to see Hunter and Dean get another trustworthy friend on the football team to bring into their and the SH5's circle of friends.

Would love to see both April and Morgan resuscitated to become likable characters after them being removed from the cheer leading squad, with maybe them eventually becoming good friends with Hunter & Alexis then becoming members of the SH5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wrap

Almost time to wrap this puppy up, it's kind of getting like beating a dead horse. It's not really going anywhere , I just read 1st page and last paragraph of whatever is the last page. You do write well , but it's just more and more of the same.........

ag2507ag2507over 6 years ago
Aperitif

For the record aperitifs come before, not after, a meal. Aperitif means to open. I think you meant digestif.

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