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Click here"Are those... Hello Kitty dolls?" Freya smirks at Granny. Nine dolls sat upright on their own, paws gently waving.
From Granny's, the tenth mirror there was no doll. Frowning at why the others got such an odd gift she took a step toward home only to be cut off by... cat's out of the stag.
"This isn't the backyard."
Heather Choi stood naked amidst the Coven. Around her all eyes were stunned by this uninvited guest. Shock following shock the nine stuffed Hello Kitty's caught on fire and burnt to a crisp before their eyes.
"GODDESS!" The Coven dropped to their knees cowering.
"Right behind ya, Goddess!" Granny nudged Heather back through her mirror.
Still not the backyard!
- COMMENTS
SZENSEIabout 2 years agoAuthorNOOOOOO BOBY... it's supposed to be a RAVEn review. LOL! I felt that chapter was my best yet in the series. I understand your thoughts on horror, to be honest I'm not a huge fan of the genre myself. When I do write horror there has to be comedy and sex to go with it or I get weary fast. To me RAVEN is in the vein of the tv show SUPERNATURAL or even BEWITCHED from the 60's. There's just enough amusement to keep me invested. Blood and gore comes and goes. At least you find it interesting enough to follow. Thanks Buddy!
Devilbobyabout 2 years agoNot a great fan of horror themes, but interesting. Written in your own inimitable style.
SZENSEIabout 2 years agoAuthorI just don't get why there are Voting Terrorists out there that seem to get off voting 1 STAR for literally every story I write. Each and every morning, each and every story I release you seem intent on trying to torture me. What drives you? Do you not have something more important to do with your life than to go out of your way to ruin people? There is no way you even read the story to know whether it's good or piss poor, all you do is tag the single star. Why would you waste your day like that? I know other Author's get attacked as well and it's sad, whether my attacker is the same one as who they face, I have no idea. All I know is one thing...
My fan base obviously disagrees with you when the votes rally against yours dear ONE STAR ATTACKER! While I can't stop you for being annoying and wasting your precious time, I hope you one day come to realize it's pointless. In the end nobody cares whether you are right in your assessment or wrong. I only write this as a tribute to ALL AUTHORS who succumb to your idiotic wisdom. Any story good or bad deserves a chance. I hope I speak for every Writer out there in saying GROW UP. Life is too short to create friction.
I'll give you ONE STAR for your determination. A couple trillion more stars and Heaven might accept you.
