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Dr. Tucker and Savannah grabbed dining room chairs and sat and watched Evan fuck the bejesus out of me. When he finally finished, emptying his balls inside me, I was toast. I was a limp dishrag and fell onto the love seat. Savannah quickly grabbed the seat next to me, as Evan trundled off to the john.
Savannah engaged Dr. Tucker in awkward conversation as he stared at my cum-filled, naked body. It became clear from his mien and little things he said, that this was the first time he had ever witnessed two people in a sexual act. He had always before been a private person.
Evan returned, and then everyone got dressed, and Dr. Tucker and Savannah thanked us profusely for the great Valentine's Day dinner, and took their leave. Once they were gone, Evan smiled at me. I changed the sheets on my double bed, because we both knew that Evan was going to spend the night.
Evan's been spending a lot of nights uptown in my apartment ever since. Sooner or later someone is going to figure out that we're siblings, but as my Dad always says, "We'll cross that bridge when we come to it."
Next week our sister Nancy is coming to New York and asked to stay with me. That should be interesting, I would think. I mean, I'm a little bisexual, and we will have to share my bed. Maybe I should, finally, invest in a real couch?
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I hope you liked this story. Please rate it with stars, and I'd love it if you'd leave a comment. I always learn from your comments! But this above all: Happy Valentine's Day!
- COMMENTS
bluesboover 1 year agoSo tedious and boring -- and incredibly un-erotic for a brother-sister incest story. Big yawn -- sorry.
LegallySanealmost 3 years agoI couldn't get through the 2nd page. The description of her doctor lovers was too boring and the attempt at humor was corny at best. The story had just so much build up I lost interest. 2*
Anonymousabout 3 years agoThe brother Evan is unlikeable. There is no building attraction nor romance with the narrator, his sister. He is merely an ass who would happily not worry about incest in trade for the convenience of sex now. We know little of their past, we are told that she has a crush on him, with the only concrete example from their past that Evan bought her lingerie to take to college, presumably so the narrator could look hot for..., ...other guys.
The brother and sister only become a couple at almost the insistence of a friend who does not know they are related, and with the advice of that friend, resulting in the purchase and presentation of enough flowers.
The narrator is slut, with no meaningful reason given, like daddy issues or unrequited love for her brother, Evan.
The narrative structure is a mess (much like this critique is unorganized, I apologize).
The narrator herself is interesting, with some self-knowledge, and a bit of humor about herself, and some internal pushes for self-respect, but throws those over reasonably easily for sex. I finished the piece to see how she got through this part of her life, what she learned, what she gained, or how she changed. I got none of that, basically. She did give in for sex again, and might be tempted by sex in the near future with her sister.
With the "at-last" coupling, there is no end of a character arc, just sex, finally. Evan staying over more does not provide needed solace in her life that the narrator tells us about, brings no joy the narrator describes for us. Evan does not become different, or better or worse, because he is now with his sister, he just is with her a lot. They do not look forward to to the future together, they have no plans, only worrying about if their incest will get out.
You have thought about the narrator a lot, I can tell, and she is interesting. Tell us more of why she is how she is, what Evan means to her and why, how she feels about Evan, how they affect each other (other that arousal and fear of incest). Tell us how Evan is good for her, or how she, ultimately, is good or bad for Evan.
Thanks for writing, and good luck, author.
