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Click here"I can guarantee she likes oral, she has me do her pussy all the time. I love doing it too, which you already know."
"Mmm, yes, I do," and we kissed for a bit and drifted off to sleep, a sound, happy, satisfied, well-fucked sleep.
We woke up the next morning about nine and had an energetic fuck that was a real world-shaker. Then, made some breakfast and walked down to our RV and knocked.
Dottie opened the door and we went in and all had coffee together and talked about our evening with our new partners.
We decided to live together, each new blended couple, for the rest of the week, Paul and Dottie together in our RV and Sharon and me in the cabin. We did get together several afternoons to have sex together, there was an added spiciness of fucking our new partners in front of the other and one couple would sit and watch the other fuck, then watch the other as they did it.
We also agreed to meet regularly to swap and they often visit us for a weekend and we have done the same with them. We also watch each other fuck their regular partners and, I must say, it's rather a turn-on to watch a brother fuck his sister. They sure do know how to do it. Years of practice, I suppose.
We've never been back to the nudist resort, though, after all, most of our time there was spent indoors enjoying a different kind of 'nature.'
- COMMENTS
WayneGibbousalmost 13 years agoAuthorDear Anonymous,
Yes, I spelled Dottie as Dotty, once.
But, I here's the age quotes from the story:
"Oh, no, um, I'm older, twenty, and Paul is eighteen." So the sister is 20, the brother 18.
"No, I moved out two years ago and last year, Paul moved in with me." So she was 18 and when he was 17 he moved in with her.
I take pride in my work and having published millions of words, I know how difficult it is to get it right. I edit my stories at least five times prior to publication. But I can't be held accountable for a poor reading of my work.
I suggest you skip any future stories of mine to save yourself the aggrvation.
Wayne Gibbous
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI don't have time to read everything I would like to and when I end up wasting time reading a story that even the author didn't care about that sucks and it's time I'll never get back to read works by writers who give a damn about their readers.
You've got just four characters and you couldn't keep straight how you spelled one of their names, bouncing between Dottie and Dotty.
Even worse, you start out when you introduce the brother and sister by saying he's 19 and she's 18 and they still live at home and fool around on the couch which causes their mother to run off and masturbate.
Then a little later you say they no longer live at home, the sister's 20 and moved out of her mom's house four years ago(what at 16?)and then her brother moved out of their mom's home and in with his sister two years ago(how old's he supposed to be now since you changed up his sisters age in the space of a page and a half story?).
I know it's a common rant on this site but that's because it's needed, PLEASE either get yourself a GOOD editor to review your post or stop making them and wasting our time on crap you didn't care enough to proofread.
