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Stephanie caught it all in her hand, licking up all the cum from her palm, slurping it up and swallowing it, licking her lips.
"Your cum, sir, it belongs to me." She said, nefariously grinning at me.
- COMMENTS
Gym52almost 3 years agoA good idea for a story, it is such a pity that you failed to properly proofread this last few pages, you have Stephanie whipping herself rather than Kinsey, plus other similar mistakes with the characters names.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThis is one of my favorite story on this site! Love stephanie & colin. I’m dying to read their other stories so please continue!
DreaMajorabout 6 years agoA fun although quite ridiculous story. It’s a problem however when the author gets his characters confused, which happens towards the end.
Anonymousover 6 years agoSeems as if there is no shortage of ideas and quite good executions .... reads easily ... minor hiccups were there any? - are easily overlooked ;-)
I liked the pace - enough details and color so that the scenes and characters really come to life - not too fast and yet, still enough scenes ...
What is missing is a bit of depth for all characters. All are treated similarly, i.e. lightly sketched. Enough for two decent chapters of fun and games.
But a longer story could open up to a higher fiction quality level with deeper exploration of motivations and relationship dynamics.
