Storm of Shadows Ch. 06

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No! Oh, dear God, no! He had almost killed her mother. He had almost killed her in his madness. If Dara hadn't intervened...

"Kothari...Kothi!" Dara cried out as he hissed again and spun away.

"Protect her, please protect her, Dara. Do what I cannot do. Guard my heart for me."

Kothari took off into the trees, running as fast and as far as he could from the human girl cradling her mother's anguished form. He had almost killed her and he didn't deserve to be anywhere near her. He truly was a monster, the very worst kind of monster in the world, because only a true monster would have come so treacherously close to murdering the one woman put on this planet for him. He had almost killed his mate...he had almost killed his mate.

To be continued...

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Love your creativity...

I love your creativity in general, but the way you don't hold back with gore and creative torture makes me that much more excited when I read your work. This makes me sound deranged and possibly a sadist, I'm not, I just love that you truly do express the extent of Agony's bloodlust and the idea of staking a vampire to a tree with a thigh bone is so Hannibal that I LOVE IT.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
NOT PREDICTABLE AT ALL!!!!!

Totally agree @anonymous 6/18/17!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Anonymous 3/13/2017

You are a downer try the old saying if you can't say something nice don't say anything at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Not sure...

if I like the idea of Kallum and the female Alpha being mates. I guess it would make sense since there are already three mated to Vamps, and a possible 4th with Elina and Karn, and now a human. But I've always kind of wanted Kallum to have a human mate too. Oh well, we'll see how it plays out. I still really want to see more of Cassia & Pietro too. There are unanswered questions there. Why his mating scar is still visible? Why was Cassia hesitant he was her mate? Did his strength, already enhanced by feeding from her become even greater than normal after the mating? Are they even truly mated? We've yet to see them communicate through a mate bond...

ChasingtheSkyChasingtheSkyabout 7 years ago

Excellent writing!

Excellent story!

Wonderful characters.

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