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- COMMENTS
Anonymous11 days agoEpic story. I am awed by your talent. I wanted to be a writer but clearly I don't have your abilities. I am the best at proofreading and found a few mistakes. For those who read the comments I'm not trying to tear him down, I LOVED this story and am amazed at how few errors there were.
Drop the "e" and add " ing" does not apply with the word singe. You get singing which isn't what you wanted. Maybe you should have just said burning.
I am the best proofreader in any universe! Lol
I have to read all of your stories now! Awesome.
Hardrider562 months agoWOW! What a great story line. Very well written. Will be reading more of your work soon.
XericXenophile5 months agoTwo alien species sex scene! Strangely arousing. Great world full of stories you've created. Thank you.
Nothingman837 months agoPlease Sir, I'd like to have more.
How about follow up stories about Jade and Evan on Jarilo? Raising a family, their kids being 3/4ths human would be really great. Fletcher and Xipa? Hernandez and Tatzi? We already know that they could have kittens...
cybertron8410 months agoid say amazing, but that word doesnt do your writing justice. power reading all your stories i may be addicted and ive read ALOT of sci fi over the last 40 yrs..
